check in....10/11 lines...we both drop same time afta check in.....
holla ............................................
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muh bad nigga i had an emergency...im ready to check in...holla.......................................

i'ma female!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!

but lets go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

alrite...so u ready or wut............................................... .................................................. .....................................

he's the New Rap Order...but know one cares what he thinks//
Plus my PUNCHES be Serving you like UnLimited Drinks//

he STRIKES Out on Pussy...no one BOWL-for-his-BALLS//
he could'nt TEACH how to DROP a Mc'ee if there was HOLES-in-a-Hall//

you need to visit Q&A...ask for some help//
cause my Punches WEAR-U-DOWN Like BAGGY PANTS
with no BELT//

you can't fuck with my skillz...and most Men Knows//
when we battle you BLACK OUT like Hidin behind TINTED
WINDOWS//

yea you tried to Bring BEEF but that shit got Slaughtered//
so have your GhostWriter to put NEW-RAPS-ON-ORDER//

same time spitten...

you against me is an obious MiSs-MaTcH //
i'll kill u line for line and u wont even DiSs-BaCk //

leave ya head spinnin like da G uNiT-cHaiN //
put these rhymes in ur inner skull and TaToo'd-on-ya-BrAiN //

after my PuncheS leave ya body fractured in BuncheS //
leave u limpen in CruncheS after u've stepped in my DungeoN //

the gates is wide open but you wont step foward //
"kill" u at the startin point and let erryone smell ya "dead" odor //

this hoe couldent make her raps "Explicit" if she pulled down her ~Skirt~ //
better belive my wrath will leave her "Tit-less"...Just peep under her ~Shirt~ //

Good Bttle...

Flow-new
Punches-New_Raps Was Better
Metas-Tonya
Vocab-tie
Originality-New!

New_rap verse was tighter. His finisher was hard too. It was a good battle though...

Yo Hit Up One or the Other

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89916


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89598

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Its tellin Me That I Didn't post an explanation yet and I just did


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Vote-Tonya

Way better punches


you need to visit Q&A...ask for some help//
cause my Punches WEAR-U-DOWN Like BAGGY PANTS
with no BELT//

you can't fuck with my skillz...and most Men Knows//
when we battle you BLACK OUT like Hidin behind TINTED
WINDOWS//



Nice^

Just werk on your Flow and Structure Girl, Nice Similes, Very Nice


Peace

umm ok
punch/tie
create/nro
injoy/nro
flow/tie
mata/tie

ehh...
multi/tie
person/tie

overall nro
cause ya made it with the finisher...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89509
me and holster
1 vote

Tonya

you need to visit Q&A...ask for some help//
cause my Punches WEAR-U-DOWN Like BAGGY PANTS
with no BELT//
^ sick

yea you tried to Bring BEEF but that shit got Slaughtered//
so have your GhostWriter to put NEW-RAPS-ON-ORDER//
^ Alright...

Girl ur weaker then i thought or r u jus takin it easy?



NRO

you against me is an obious MiSs-MaTcH //
i'll kill u line for line and u wont even DiSs-BaCk //
^ played

leave ya head spinnin like da G uNiT-cHaiN //
put these rhymes in ur inner skull and TaToo'd-on-ya-BrAiN //
^ Wack

after my PuncheS leave ya body fractured in BuncheS //
leave u limpen in CruncheS after u've stepped in my DungeoN
^ ur best line


vote= Tonya!

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yea tonya trying to get back to old times
seen better from you but you get my vote

like lady said in her breakdown NRO used too many played lines
tonya escaped witta couple of witty punches and some decent wordplay...
overall her verse was kinda weak
NRO verse was just way too played and punches didnt really connect
honest vote here

poll vote=tonya

hit me up yall need honest votes here

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89962


out dis biatch.......

OHHHHHHHH SHIT
THAT WAS A GOOD ASS BATTLE

Yall both had excilent punches
a nice flow good
vocab good

Shit man!!!!!!!! That was a battle Tonya held that down and so did Thorn

Tonya in my opinion has you by a hair her shit was explicit everyline a punch you to but in that area like I said by a hair

My vote Tonya

Nice Shit To Both Of Ya'll

we are in need of votes
catch vs loke
loke vs nitemarre

should be in frontlines if not page 1 then definatly page 2

1

thanks for showin luv and votin yall....

oh yea dam thats a slap in tha face from lady d
sayin i'm weaker than she thought!!!

pay per view time baby.....me and you

hm.............

punches - tm
metas - tie
flow tie
structure - tie
vocab / complexity - tm
enjoyment - Tm

vote tm......

both yall peep my battle in front lines Vs. Mario.....
peace.....

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