peep out my track zeen.
gimme some feedback n shit.

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Didn't like the beat that much, the delivery went to the beat so i wasn't feelin that either. It was too kiddie style to me. Police state was much, much tighter i thought that one was aight. I can't get past yer accent, were you from nigga. Just not used to it. Police state was a good cut though. You got real tight sound quality and production. Nice drops.

Lookin for feedback on my cut "Incidental Contact" in the song forum............................................. .............get back!!!!!

im listening to police state... ok beat is nice... is it soleternity? ok first cat flow was on point.. delivery pretty good.. hooks cool... second cat.. needs to record at a lower setting i can hear his voice clipping.. and it loud like whoa over the beat... flow was a little off as well...ok 3rd cat flow starts off then it starts to hit better.. you try and speed up.. or you got too many words in the bars at the beginning.. delivery is emotionally cool.. but slightly slurred ..i think thats only when you overly sped up tho..overall this is a cool track ... good work guys couple little flaws.. but cool shit.. keep working and improving and doing your thing guys
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thanx for the replies yo, I appreciate it.
and I'm Jamaican yo.
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umm..

I wasn't feelin this...

no hook...beat was weak...you need to calm down on the voice modulation..

the chick sittin here with me says to work with your accent..not against it...cause it makes u sound soft...

thats her 2..

nonetheless..

keep spittin...

:sidenote:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90217

...peep ^^