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bitch line booted me aightttttttttttttttttttttttttt i'm innnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn--------------

This Cats Crazy, Battlin' Me Will Be A Cutastraphe
His Whole Family Shall Fall Victim To A Tragedy
You Wouldn't Take A "Risk" If You Had A Strategy
You Winnin This Battle Is A Misconception, Also Known As Fallacy
Thinkin You Can Beat Me You Must Just Be That Dumb
Cuz Like A Midget Jumpin Shaq...I'm Too Much To Overcome
You Lie Gay Talkin Shit While I Just Stand Straight
Blowin Army Guards Is The Only Way You'll Establish A Fan Base
You Couldn't Win If You Aas a "Shoe-In", Face It You Blew It
You Chasin Ya Rap Ability but Then What the Fuck is You Persuin!?
Catastrophic Like Benzino Down To His LAST Buck and Last Resort
And Rite-ly, Ya Skill Is Like Midgets Trippin, Always Falling Short

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yeh nigga---------


yo TECH is a played cat, convey how he gets slayed/
FREESTYLES so bad like PIERRE at the Florida Marlin's Parade/
Pardon Me he's gay, like how it would sound as Miami/(he's from Miami beach)
Not that good, i flip-raps that put's Artifacts-back in the ground/
actually un-found, like his MASK on his BIRTHDAY-every year it's a dumb-CLOWN/(halloween is his birthday)
and it' not FUN now, but i'll keep the PEACE then Depart/
cuz i see right through this TECHNICIAN like on Monster-Garage/
i culd rhyme more words, then his AGE-doubled/(he's 500 it say sin his profile)
gets hit with one PUNCH aint nuthin but FACE and STUBBLE/
as i'm BLAZIN suttle, he betta take more HITS/
cuz he gonna need to be HIGHER then BONO in an AIRPLANE coughin SHIIT/
to rip this kidd, cut i Conquer and Decease/
tech? even RUNNIN with CANDY culdn't drop a PIECE/

outzzz gl

nice drop./ ................uppn.....


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This was a good battle...
Structure: Tech
Flow: Tech
Punches: Tech
Personals: Cut
Wordplay:Tech
Overall this was a good battle, but my vote goes to Tech, he came harder i thought overall, Props to both though.

yo tech wut's that one line in ya verse i just read over it again and i'm like wtf..lol

what is that sayin?

you couldnt win if you WAS a Shoe In.....

small typo......my bad...........


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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh iiiii got yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa setup for the next line stupid though but just an opinion----------------let's get sum more votes------peepzzz

sorry tech won this one.. He ws just a lil more clear, and a lil more concise. Cut's wordplay was cleaner though.
My vote goes to tech

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letssssssssssssssss get summmmmmmmmmmmmmm more votessssssssssssssssssssss and we'll get ya'llllllll backkkkkkkkkkk too

opener:tek
closer:tech
wordplay:cut
punches:tech
structue:tie
flow:tie
overall:tech


nice battle peeps,but tech took this one

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