you got till 8 tonight
i'm giving you plenty of time to write something ill
if not i aint postion

checkin

I'm eat this kid up like hamburgers at Micky D's
i can't stand murder/ but i'll shoot nuts in his mouth and leave'm with sticky teeth
Son/ i take 5 minutes to post a rhyme-- but you probly wont reply
if i was battlin me --than neither would i
i can spit lines to infect ya throat/ inject a hose to ya unprotected nose
and expose "the real you" ina mirror and reflect ya bones
i'll choke a spot and pop ya lips/ blow a shot and poke-a-dot ya ribs/ with a glock and clip that killed 2pac and big
ya harmless
All you did was start this/ lyrical arsinist to pop darvisest
till i murder so many cats i wont even kno wwhos arm this is
i'm a "convertible" killer with nuthin but hotness
like my shotty when retracts back to leave ya body topless
like this rhymes when you try to speak on my topics


no beef

pre-write??.....jus post now...see what u can do off the top aight?


look......

im Laughin-cuz-he's-Actin!!, this Bastard ain't clapped-a-gat/
thinkin Gangsta's-jus-Saggin, Du-Rag, and-a-Backwards-Hat/

if i'd known u were so Wack, I wouldve bought u a new Extension/
Cuz the best LINE u Have, is ur Dial-Up-Connection/

i blaze chronic n That's-It,,,,,,,,,but i'll-smoke-u/
till ur ashes are on my Jacket, and ur folks-roast-to/

My ass dont ever Poke, I swing the whole Fuckin Cactus/
to have ur Casket made Custom and Seperate Bag for ur Top-Half/

ill Brake you Chest in Sections, jus to see ur Face Expression/
then Paint my Name in Red to match Pigment of ur Presence....mother fucker/

key now.....

dont wait till later

Micky took this overall. He had better punches. 1liner had a couple good lines but not enough for the win....elevate...and check this out wit honest votes...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90289

Thx!

Lol Mickey You GOt This Cat With The Line Rhyme Lmao Played Out But Still Nice You Got The Vote Son But Ya Both need To Elevate~1

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boy these votes are really explained
sounds like Mickeys beg for replys in exchange for brain


but thats my 2 cents

this has to be the tightest newb battle i seen


opener-tie
closer-mickey
punches-mickey barely
personals-none
enjoyment-1 liner
multi's-1 liner
vocab-blah
best line-1 liner...the not knowin who's arm shit
creativity-tie


overall my vote goes to









oh wait...i just realized that there isnt a poll....holla back when u get one and i'll hit it up

upin
we need the votes and please no dickryda's
or crews

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