These vines crowd the minds brow so theres no vision
Mines unploughed inside to show-how to hold derision
Behold suspision with the inability to see the troubles
Like prized ballet dress, my rise too gambling doubles
Rambling rubbles as I spit it crumbles since I was bred
Squince when he read he'd have to cut back to evolve
He thought with all his weeding he'd never grow cold
He never showed moulds, he just attatched his stacks
Wore it on his sleeve so they could put a patch on that
But infact his impact's been kept secret from the world
He only trailed his ground while skills waited to unfurl
Stated a pearl at the bottom of the ocean clammed up
Everyones foot in adore so this would never slam shut
Plans uncut, He was overgrown when he was to small
Learned he was being used when he yearns to be tall

damn man..I couldnt get this piece....either u missed a line or i did....cuz IM ! CONFUSED MUDDA FFFFFFF

lol...

Theres a switch line in this man. .So don't stress over the amount of the number of lines. .

Pz.

ok...after like the 3rd time i got it..!!!
LOL...pleaze excuse my dullnes today....

anyway....the flow was the bite man....it was unlike my gurl, lovely and clean...
and the internals were dope allso....
i liked the internals when u were switchin,,,after the 2nd time, i figured it out with the internals and shit....

i liked it man....its the only piece thats ever made the back of my mind hot from thinkin and being confused...lol

smashing piece blud..!! PROPS

This Was Nice.. You Have TO Look Deep
To Get Into It, But I Did. This Piece Was
Dope.. The Story Was Hard To Fall Into
But The Depth Was Superb.. Good Shit


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that shit was nice man, i had to read it like ten times, but i finally got it, keep postin you crazy fuck

Yo. .Thanx, I tried to keep this shit complex, keep alot of indepth flips,

Any1 find 'em?? Any1 enjoy it??

yeah this was good,
had a nice flow,
some real good internals, none seemed forced,
complex piece,
overall i liked this, had real depth about it, you obviously spent some time on it, good drop keep it up


can you check out my consider yourself lucky piece

Flow Flow Flow..quite crappy..yeah a little hard to follow..you gotta be fully sober to understand it all..just work on the flow..peace