The Rough Draft Of This Track

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first one.

listened to this awhile ago..
..and turned it off because of the beginning.

nah - flow was good, beat is nice .. bumpable ..

now, hop off my avvy.

Ehhh..I'm not really feelin It Jae..The Hook more so..you're flow is tops on the verse..If You worked on it a bit more you know you could make it dope as hell...One We Is Fucken Dope As Hell hahaha...Jeah! You know what you can do..Pz..

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understood about 3 words....

and the chorus..

the rest sounded liek you was TRYING to spit on a fast tip...but just couldnt...

dunno

see how the final version comes out i guess
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^did you understand more than maybe 5 words?

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Well i wasn't really feelin this track but it was OK. I think you got great mic presence and yer flow is on point, lyrics was just OK (i think it's how you were spittin but nothing stood out to me). i just wasn't feelin yer style 2 much but that's a preference of 1 mc to another. Your sound quality was good, a few jumbled words but this isn't studio shit like you said. Overall this was a decent drop.

I see you were voted most likely to make it outside of the net...mmmmmmm...beg to differ...we should audio battle sometime soon...stay up!!! 1