I HEARD A BELL THAT WOULD HAVE AWAKENED THE DEAD CAUSE SOMEONE HAD POSTED MY BAIL /
FOR THE SALE AND DISTRUBUTION OF NARCOTICS I WASTE TIME I DONT HAVE IN THIS CELL /
BEHIND THESE STEEL BARS I SCRIBBLE INK BARS IN WHAT REMAINS OF AN OLD TABLET/
I CONSUME TABLETS FOR A HEADACHE IN MY HEAD IN WHICH IT HAD NO PERMISSION TO INHABIT/
CONTIMPLATIONS OF THE MIND, I OWN NOT MY TIME, ITS NOT MINE, MY EMOTIONS NEED THOUGHTS TO LEAD THEM/
AND WITH THIS FINE I FIND MYSELF LOOSING CONTACT WITH MY FREEDOM/
ENCLOSED BY THE BRICKS THAT SHELTER CRIMINALS, HAVENT SEEN THE SUN'S LIGHT IN A WHILE/
HUNG ON THE MEMORIES OF ADOLESCENCE, IN THAT I MEAN MY SON'S SMILE/
MENTALLY EXHAUSTED FROM A BAND OF OUTCAST THAT EMBELISH ON THE ANGER OF HEARTS/
BANNED FROM A SOCIETY THAT PLACES TOO MANY EMPHASIS ON KEEPING MY PEOPLE APART/
OUR POLITICAL LEADERS CAN SEND A MAN TO THE MOON BUT THEY CANT APPLY THE BRAKE TO VIOLENCE/
ITS TIME FOR A BREAK TO ALL THE KILLINGS IAM TIRED OF HEARING LET THERE BE A MOMENT OF SILENCE/
I BLEW THE DUST OFF MY SLEEVES AS THE BLUE FACE OF THE HORIZON PEAKED THROUGH THE CLOUDS/
WHO KNEW I'D BE RELEASED A NEW DAY WOULD BEGIN, BEING A STRONGER VOICE IS WHAT I HAVE VOWED/////

Although I dont much care for the use of capitals, feels like you are screaming.. this is really really good. Every line is unique, with such meaning and emotion... very impressive. For me, the entire piece flowed well.
Particularily liked these lines -

OUR POLITICAL LEADERS CAN SEND A MAN TO THE MOON BUT THEY CANT APPLY THE BRAKE TO VIOLENCE/
ITS TIME FOR A BREAK TO ALL THE KILLINGS IAM TIRED OF HEARING LET THERE BE A MOMENT OF SILENCE/

Strong message there.
The last line is also good, empowering...I hope you continue on this journey you have begun..
Great read, enjoyed this. Thanks.

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FOR THE SALE AND DISTRUBUTION OF NARCOTICS I WASTE TIME I DONT HAVE IN THIS CELL /

^^that was the beauty of the poem to me...plain an simple i liked how u expressed ur truth in ur words every line was new and ur own....so if u cant own ur head why not ur words?....magnificent..stay up an breathe easy this fresh air -shi-

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...do tell...

Every lil boi is born shi......their ignorance makes them bold......

simply put"...wise words whisperd to deaf ears as no one hears the blurred proverbs that're always spoken clear so i fuckin swear that my where wont be here as time tolls..." second verse of 'Elevate' written by -shi-