Yo 10 linez roughly?
No bitin
No shit votez
You spit first? - is that cool?

Checkin In..................

Yo I 4got that u said I should spit first so I will. Hopefully you'll have checked in by tha time I've spit ma shit.

Checkin and spittin..............Evil Pedro............Killin Herbz and smokin Toner

With no winz and 2 losses…How you gonna compete with me
With a name like S-Toner…How can you even claim to be an mc?
So fuck Toner…Never win a battle,You must be lyrically cursed
I peeped ya other verses…wack battlez, got carried away in a hearse
Beatin Toner into submission…I’m lyrically strong but Tonez weak
You get beat of plain skilled newbz…But beatin you ain’t a hard feat
In the street, me and Tone Blow for Blow? ...One winner in this shit
Getting This Lightweight Suicidal…Plaguing Rb, Buggin with his wrist slit
My Sig Sayz Lyrical Soldier…Battlin in the trenches, Beatin Herbz
This guyz been fucked and Ditched…Lyrically Kicked to The Curb……..

Peep this shit

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sigs are for herbs...Thats why I got one!

Yo I gotta go.......I'm gonna drop 2 moz....Sorry Dude.............................................. .

aiiiiiiiiiiiiiight then..................................drop tomorrow..............ya better not be runnin ha ha.....................

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sigs are for herbs...Thats why I got one!

Yo, thanks for your patience dude, much appreaited.

Apprarentally I need to elevate - verbally /
Watch me smoke this Cat - Herbally //
Bitin Rapers styles like head lice /
Includin your verse Tu Pacs been murdered twice /
Playin this Cat like I spat this verse thrice /
Type Cast gansta, like De Niro does Heist /
Coll down Nok'd, while I put this bitch on Ice /
Exorcise the Dawg in yer like I'm Jesus Christ //
Yo Nok'd on your verse you trip, get a grip, learn to rip /
You make bitches sick,Wipe your lip, cos u been ridin dick //
Take a lesson from me - in your verses involve pschology /
Structure around reality, cos you oozin ideology //
You a gansta? kid that's just an illusion/
Your bogus rymes intoxicate my air like pollution//
Spittin gypsy shit - Like I'm cursed, I've took Worst/
When I'm tooled up - your first, Flip this shit, roles reversed//
From beyond da grave ma rep's been nursed, like a leppa/
I'll be stone cold dead before Mancheser's the North West Reppa.

Peace

Should be 'cool down Nok'd'............................................ .................................................. ..

Yo now we should be able to get some votez on this shit..............................................

Flow: N
Punchs: N
Metas: N
Structure: N
Enjoyment: N

Vote: N

This battle wasnt strong...N had harder punchs n all tht shit...keep elevatin Toner you got potential

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1

hit that up witta honest vote

uppin for votez............................1st up..........................................Good votes with good explaination needed

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Uppin fo votez....feedback needed fo vote please............................................ ....................................

constructive criticism n personal vote

cant vote coz he's ma boy but nok'd did have this down wid punches and shit......toner was aight but nah
vote if i cud=nok

Structure: N
Floh: N
Punches: N
Overall: N
Vote: N

pretty easy to decide... toner needs to elevate... no hate to any..

could ya'll hit this battle up, its 1-0 my lead... vote fairly.link is in my sig..
thanx

Open- Toner
Metas - Toner
Creavitity - Tie
Flow - Nok
Finish - Nok
Dek's Abuse Meter- 8 for Nok, 5 for Toner

vote = Nok

toner u had sum decent ieas but they could have been worked better to hit with more fire. plus, sum of the lines i just don't get...like ya finish...prolly cu i'm not from the uk

Best line:
This guyz been fucked and Ditched…Lyrically Kicked to The Curb……..

Return feed on my battles.

Uppin this shit.............................................. .................................................. ...........................