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Mind theory by wogzta
And paranoia by brixton and pedro nok

Sent to heaven

My life is chaos, there's no need for living anymore
I'm tired of the world, it's time to come to the fore
My physical scars can heal but my mental scars can't
Afar from satisfied it feels so unreal, a prayer I chant
Searching for an escape, a way to end a longtime suffering
but i'll miss the sun and the fine weather, and what it can bring
I'm up on the roof now, ready to make my biggest step ever
I'm feeling no sadness, a few seconds and I'll be gone forever
I close my eyes and lean forward, wait am I ready for this?
But my feet are slipping, I'm falling for the concretes kiss

I get conscious as light flashes before my closed eyes
So I open them but all I can see are purple skies
Angel-like faces before me, closest to me an elevator man
"Welcome, You have finally reached the end of your lifespan"
He takes me with him on a journey high above the clouds
I feel happy even though I don't hear cheerful crowds
"You're now about to meet the highest of all being..
So for the moment forget about thinking of sightseeing..
He will speak to you about your future together with us..
so listen carefully, he will guide you like he did us."

Now I'm standing in front of the one and only power
Tall and strong, but still beautifull as a flower
"John, I thought better of you acting like you did..
Ending your life, leaving tragic behind you I won't forgive..
Since your time hasn't come, I'm giving you another chance..
You're going to wake up as a newborn ready to advance..
All memories from your past will be ereased for new ones..
Which means you wont have the to knowledge you knew once..
With this new chance I'm expecting you to do some good..
That will be printed into your head to remember for good."

A soft breeze fill my lungs with air for the first time
As I open my eyes, my vision are nothing but sublime
Someone lifting me high, soon squeezing me tight
I feel skin far from dry, still it feels alright
My body is filled with warmth and love for this soul
I'm not sure, but it's like someone filled a hole
I know nothing about my future and what it will bring
But I can feel it'll be bright and lovely as the spring
My path as been foretold and nothing can change that
and I know I don't have to worry about the aftermath


Pz......

nice shit i'm give u a 8/10

Dope Piece Bro.. Way To Rep Ro Sent
And Its Good To See Other Than Me
A ClaustrophobicS Piece

Ups...

Uppin........

pretty nice drop man
could envision what was happening thru out...pretty dope
some wordplay in there...the rhyme scheme was the only thing perhaps lacking...need a few more internals or multies even
really enjoyed the read and it was original to me
props twizzle
I close my eyes and lean forward, wait am I ready for this?
But my feet are slipping, I'm falling for the concretes kiss

^dope line