Funn is the illest, anti socialist/
Visualize my images, the greatest mind rapist/
Primed with bad breath, that shapes my words of hatred/
(he can’t be humanist)
Make you dread reality, the ‘realist’ immoralist/
You emcee’s got no calories, I’m a cerebral cartoonist/
Funn got no ethics, so I’m nothin’ to mess wit/
Spit scripts so hot, that I’m billed for electric/
Got all the freestylers memorizing my lectures/
But If I CATCH YOU!!!, I’d liquidate you, like lethal infections/
‘don’t move or your fucked’, coz erections are weapons/
‘my sperm ooze into your butt’ now let that be a lesson/
subliminal thoughts proceeding my criminal thoughts/
perturb the suburbs, coz that’s all I was taught/
I’d make RB an infamous name for a blood sport/
Coz you dudes opposing me,
gotta know violence be my first resort/
RB gotta be the top non-pornographic website/
But I bet the guests up in here bite the rhymes we all write/
It’s like an emcee wit no meaning to life/
Ain’t got shit to say anyway, shoot outs ain’t dat rife/
Got the ‘formula’ that makes me a ‘monstar’ on the mike/
My ‘words’ be ‘perfect’ due to wisdom an intellectual insight/
A G neglected by the unit, got ‘No Limit’ without full tanks/
Grab a gorilla, Lloyd gonna find me jack.n.banks/
Can’t Evolve, coz I’m fuckin broke, my fate is ‘born2steal/
Forced through a hole, that my dad eloped,
got the midwife screamin’ “born2kill”/
Blow up once signed, Bill wanna blame me for every murder attempt/
Saying’ “it’s not the artillery used in my war” its Funn.D’s lyrical ‘content’/

.......


Well my friends,
try to comprehend why it’s RB I choose to attend/
Go away jus to come back, an I’ll be back after ‘The End’/

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Park Life ( 1 2 ) fgee 20 74 11-12-03 04:58 PM


All It Takes A.T. 5 21 11-12-03 04:40 PM


IF I COULD THEN I WOULD (funny rap)

uppin'

it's a slap in the face... still no feed bk... come on wake up on ya bwoy Funn...



UPPIN'

This was a good peice...the shout outs were a good idea (even though LM isnt mentioned).
I like the way you repped rb with good flow and structure...vocab could be upped but thats about it.
Good peice...7/10

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Finally, thanx... whoeva was in my mind at the time I jus jogged down, if dere was a list of every member I wud ave put down everyone (I encountered during my 3 months here) ... Vocab was purposly not focused on here, I reakon I'm better at topical verses...

still uppin' dis!!!

good read, i think you had some good multies and vocab, it was a unique piece, on how you showed love for rb, keep it up pz

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Thanx, I'ma do another Rap like dis an mention everyone...

uppin'

Good little read and very creative shout outs.

And I was one of em!

Thanks.

Pretty much a self-prop verse...

Eh, on that part.

But you used good wordplay and vocab and didn't make it suck like alot of those kinda verses can do.

And as I said before, the shout outs were done in a pretty cool manner with nice wordplay.

Overall: 7/10

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Thanx, uppin'

yo that ish was nice even tho i wasn't mentioned lol na but yo that jank was nice i agree with what everyone else has said it was a real nice piece keep dropp'n iight yo holla at cha boi and check out my "Verses" iight ~1

That was hot yo, I liked how the word's flowed with your ideas, it was a very creative piece..def. got skill man.

IT WAS AIIGHT... IT'S COOL THAT YOU SHOWED LUV TO OTHER KATS ON THE SITE... I DIDN'T GET IT AT FIRST CUZ I'M NEW HERE.... IT STILL NEEDS SOME TWEAKING TO BE HOT, THOUGH... KEEP AT IT.

For da last time... (maybe) uppin'