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Old 11-12-03, 01:36 PM   #1
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xxxSoft Focus vs warlordsxxx...~~topical crew BATTLE~~

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Alright i figured instead of tons of topics we'll just do one huge one that each person can be part of.......

Topic: The 3 elements of earth (Water, Dirt, Wind) 1 Earth...for the 3 elements give the contribution each gives to earth and the reasoning they exist....honestly open your minds to it...whatever direction you think you should go...go with it...

Lines per crew rep...10-20 max
no crew votes obviously....
thats about it good luck


...........LINE UP...............
Deacon vs Rob D ..... assigned =Earth
calisto vs Ill mental ...... = water
Filed vs Skiddz...... = Dirt
content vs Whitelighting....
=Wind

due date: november 19th
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Old 11-12-03, 01:40 PM   #2
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Deacon ~earth~

As the sky fills with silence,

The wind blows through my landscapes
as the dirt below carries my grain,
The water inserts it's fertile minerals
so my innerself remains the same......

So now see us in the ocean, where blue rays of beauty glow,
Feel it in a vessel, where these rapid rivers flow,
Hear me whisper in your ear, so stunning it fills the air...
See me in a tree top high, reach and feel me flying

Falling like stars from these blue skies,
such beauty aquires my being..
I constitute a helping hand my body its mine for healing
As the widow women weep's a saddened story,
amongst this lonely hour...
My body of soil conserves her,
through the mercy of this flower..
Through life a common death to breathe,
regonize my matter Dirt, wind and water.....



Calisto ~water~

Expel me through your lips, upon my rollercoaster of air
Condensation hangs on hips, after washing away an affair
Daring to touch sacred droplets, as I gently show you I care
Vow to vaporize friendships, forever searching nowhere
Touches into tense fingertips, symbolical embracing wears
And the latter fails to drip, beyond the brutality when bare
As if hung on reality grips, no compassion can compare
To the moisture upon lips, when taking away all air

Numbness conquers into fears, handling hardly all of this
Massive flooding alias tears, I can’t control the pessimist
Invading consciousness peers, as if to come to my assist
But reclusively begins to adhere, just as I request aid to resist
Dwarfing doubts as they near, wondering lines across my wrists
Magnificents life merely mirrors, margins of error within our midst
Justifying judgments, disputing jeers, falls deaf when displaying fists
Ferociously fighting senseless fears, try as you might, you can’t defeat this


filed ~dirt~

My mind deeply narrows, my thoughts expand and soar
over the blinding beautiful outlay of this land,
its carpet becomes the main focus of my poundering tour
from mud and graval, to unprocessed glass called sand.

Each walking ordinary day I place without much thought
my own two feet upon this complex earth's surface,
and today i finally relize, this was no quick drawn plot
instead a lot of love and deep thinking done with zero haste.

Mother nature reached a problem after the sky was painted blue
all of her newly made creations were falling away, pushing apart,
the she relized she need something more, she created worlds first glue
her own soft gentle hands molded up the new ground, earth's non-beating heart.

This provided solid platform that keeps the world securely one
holds all nations strongly together through peace and war,
for if this given was to vanish we would crumble to the hot sun
and im afraid to say but without this grumy dirt all creations would be no more.

Content ~wind~

Each and every leaf has fallen from a heavenly
Tree..maintaining as a passagger of this
Plane and we let it fly free....

Jesus rides shotty periodically I merely confirm his
Coordinates as if footprints n magnifying glasses
Weren't enough..there was a windy road at first
Then I proportioned unpaved it saved it....

I exist as that everlasting puppet master with invisible
Strings..uplifting spirits as they spread out their wings
Throughout these phases saved them always...

Clouds are assembled for the misguided to realize better
Days..now everyones painting gorgeous pictures from
Their iris with amazement lively..every act is instrumental...

Instant message subliminals quarantine this mimic
Rooms perimeter in the most efficent ways possible
This eternal classrooms always crowded everyday
Represents another stage for the commencement

Some found the man upstairs some lost the truth and
Missed him..along the obstacles some leaves stick to the
Soggy mud surfaces and call it crew..transform to victims

Im the one that kept you walking all the way across the
Bridge..so you could recieve counscelling and also love
The wife and kids......

When friends and family disowned like exiled Jehovias
Witnesses..I blew everyone back into formation once
They payed off your emotional pension quick

As a silent worker of God im content with his honorable
Mentions..as for a final phrase well its love life live it
To the extremes since it can leave in an instant

Everythings not what it seems in the air tonight so let
Me guide you all with peace and safe travels

we'll edit in this thread...

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Old 11-12-03, 04:19 PM   #3
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This sounds good...So I'll put my verse up.

Dirt.
Yes dirt.
It doesn't sound like much, when your hear it at this time
Knowing that its the second most common thing you'll find
Next to the water...which on the ocean floor you find dirt
From which food grows, and for which man has to work
Dirt...That without it, The planet wouldn't be held together
There wouldn't be nothing to pave pavement,falling forever
And the planets safety, what peacemakers really yearn
Knowing from dust we came, and right into the dirt we return
You take it for granted, step on it, and not even try to realize
Dirt is the foundation for Earth, more than meets the eyes
Dirt, fertile or not, its the springing waters for civilization
Yet we pollute it, and don't even try take it to consideration
Dirt What we take granted everyday, yet is so essential
Without it, Then there is no need for life or it's credentials
We have to be thankful, like a flower grows,civ. springs
Trees that have roots inplanted on which birds sing
Wer'e taking it for granted, since it holds things together
But what would we be without it? Civilized People? Never
Dirt...Be thankful you are here, because Your earths Cause
Dirt...We think its so impure, but it has not one of our Flaws
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Old 11-12-03, 05:44 PM   #4
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Topics fine.Just one question, Is my topic earth the comming together of the three elements?
 
Old 11-12-03, 06:38 PM   #5
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basically it explains all the elements and how the earth contributes them to the cycle
.hahah if that makes sense....

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Old 11-13-03, 04:14 PM   #6
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Wha happened to everyone else? Shouldn't everyone check in first?
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Old 11-13-03, 04:34 PM   #7
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filed checking in

my will be up really soon, just gotta work out some spelling lol

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Old 11-13-03, 07:49 PM   #8
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yeah that would be smart...

check in...soft focus awaits....we are set to post just about...

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Old 11-13-03, 10:40 PM   #9
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hey..if we have a no show, I posted my verse,lol, I wouldn't even mind putting up verses for the rest of the topics..
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Old 11-14-03, 02:53 AM   #10
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i wont no show, just didnt have time to do my verse yet but it will be done soon
 
Old 11-14-03, 02:50 PM   #11
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yeah if someone no shows...its an automatic loss for the whole crew you guys wouldnt want that....soo get your guys writing....

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Old 11-14-03, 11:25 PM   #12
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mmk I've never battled so here's my peice

Expel me through your lips, upon my rollercoaster of air
Condensation hangs on hips, after washing away an affair
Daring to touch sacred droplets, as I gently show you I care
Vow to vaporize friendships, forever searching nowhere
Touches into tense fingertips, symbolical embracing wears
And the latter fails to drip, beyond the brutality when bare
As if hung on reality grips, no compassion can compare
To the moisture upon lips, when taking away all air

Numbness conquers into fears, handling hardly all of this
Massive flooding alias tears, I can’t control the pessimist
Invading consciousness peers, as if to come to my assist
But reclusively begins to adhere, just as I request aid to resist
Dwarfing doubts as they near, wondering lines across my wrists
Magnificents life merely mirrors, margins of error within our midst
Justifying judgments, disputing jeers, falls deaf when displaying fists
Ferociously fighting senseless fears, try as you might, you can’t defeat this

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Old 11-14-03, 11:42 PM   #13
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we're all done with our verses on the topics..
there wont be any no shows when we all have
verses done alredy but this thread should be edited

isnt the due date the 19'th..even if its not we're done alredy
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Old 11-17-03, 01:27 PM   #14
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Had a really difficult time with this topic..
Wind
Unknowing Force, Strikes When You Least Expect
Creates Damage Or Clears Pollution, Uneasy To Detect
Influences People Everyday, Sparks A Tear To Eye
Used in Song Like The Tragic Passing Of Lady Di
You Can Be Gone Like The Wind Or Sit Contently
Some Say It's Like a Luxury Bently
It's Efficient And Fast Between Every Point
A Simple Breeze Seems To Relax The Joints
Turns You On Sexually For Those Who Wear A Dress
That Devil Kicks Up, Thong Exposed, You Got a Mess
It Achieves It's Business Fluently And Conscise
Passes The Scent Of Those Pesky Little Mice
Gives Away The Beasts Location
You Solve The Crime, It Settles The Nation
An Open Ended Puzzling Mystery
You Can't Open Your Door And Physically See
It Invokes Imagination, Never Drawing Conclusions
Might Have Been Always The Same, Or Did It Undergo Evolution
This Is Left To Stir Up Thought Process
No Direction, I'm Just As Puzzled As The Next
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Old 11-18-03, 01:06 PM   #15
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alright, i think we have it.....

awaits till warlords come......dont no show!!!!!!!

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