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yo i getz to use ma muthafukin verse kid i aint fukin writin anutha verse iight
whats da votin rules
first to 5 votes winz or 3-0 ko
sound good?

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ExPlicitOT
~'LyRiCaLLy UnToPaBlE'~
~FrEe AgeNt~

"iight look i already see dis cats shook" explicit grabs da mic
"i guess i drop first"


Now dat im here ~checkin-in~ your gunna b clap clapped n ~wrecked-ma-friend~//
Got no time for yo ~sex-offense~ u lackin self defence again read ya battle you sound like a ~Trans-LesbiaN~//

Call ya self tek time to check ya head n get ~ready~//
U in for da ultimate spit any cat ever heard, dont worry youll ~get-plenty~//

Explicit spit his lyrical clips like spiritual-trips Im aka E-clipz the ~realist-ish~//
You already know you cant ~deal-wit-dis~ im true realness you remind of the ~realist-bitch~//

The only tek u gotz is the tek on ya head when you got ~dropped~//
Dont come to me like lets-b-friends cuz ull get ~popped~//(sorry dis line was short)


~Tha Finisher~

next time kid when u call a batlle u better specify that u a ~lessa-guy~//(lessa=less skill dan me haha)
when it come to testing me youll get ~left-ta-die~ Ill kill any cat that has tha ~chest-to-try~(the heart to try)

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ExPlicitOT
~'LyRiCaLLy UnToPaBlE'~
~FrEe AgeNt~

iight now spit summtin
and dont forget i aint been to dis site in like a year or sometin i forget how it works yo

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ExPlicitOT
~'LyRiCaLLy UnToPaBlE'~
~FrEe AgeNt~

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WOW EXTREMELY STRETCHED BARS FROM BOTH.....GOOD FLOW BUT C'MON

PUNCHES=TEK
SUSTAINMENT=TEK
ORIGANALITY=BOTH
CREATIVITY=TEK
FLOW=BOTH...LITTLE
PERSONALS=TEK
OVERALL=TEK....JUS GAVE MORE

MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT UP MA BATTLE WITH DACURSE IN MA SIG..PZ

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Tek took every catagory worth mentioning.

Even shitty format. LOL!

Ya getting two lines and forcing them into one.

It fucks up ya rhyme scheme cuz the last words don't rhyme at all.
You rhymed them within one line.
Still comes out ok.
Seriously, I used ta do the exact same thing.
S-t-r-e-t-c-h-e-d as hell and rhyme within the same line.

But I elevated.

You will too.

I can't figure out if Ex is dissing you or Tha Realist.

He mentions the name a couple of times..

Weak punches, not much wordplay and no personals came outta Ex's rhyme.

Direct your punches, use shit in his sig or his name to personalize it some.

Just try harder to insult. Pretend he's right in front of ya.

Peace

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yo Tek took this easily in every way

punches were harder
personals nailed
his verse was much more creative

vote: tek

Yo, some nice punches, jsut the bars were a lil stretched and some forced mulites. Both of you had good punches. I think tek edged this one out cuz he had more material and better flowing punches. Try not 2 type in bold 24/7 seems "newbish"

Vote: tek

Can you return the favour and vote on this battle:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91122