Found alive inside a dead hooker sleepin wit her lovers dick,
Thought he was rich turned out this fagget just another prick,
You turned out about as ugly n stout as ya dead mothers tit,
Carryin various smells to my area's that could smother shit,
So clean ya clitoris and stop dispensing that bitter piss,
Your toilets Dirty now no matter if you hit or miss,
Dirty needles like that you might as well slit your wrists,
Just cause ya dont brush ya teeth dont mean u can spit your diss,
If you was a rapper you'd be a Dirtbag wit -less then- a basic flow,
You've just been cheated on by ya fuckin -best friend- so face it ho,
Youd be better off openin a whore shop in -west end- witta bracelet show,

somebody give me some feedback on this shit... I thought it was pretty good.. but it dont matter what i think of my own piece. Uppin for feedback.

Very deep thought used in this piece, I liked it tho. the flow is I'll' and it was creative...

peace