6-8 bars

ill spit first.....no feeding

after check in i got 24 hours to post and after i post you got anohta 24 hours to post yours

5votes
no dk
no crew
no hate

all votes must be explaiend

Catagories...

opening
flow
metas
punches
personals
closing

checkin in... after u check in i got 24 hours......................................
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sry bout that... those are the official rules ^^

i fucked up on the first one......................

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Checkin in

‘Envy-Skillz your ass has no talent//
Slipping up on your heels, my spits make you lose balance//
Standing over you like a 9ft murderer//
I slam a spit at you, like a champion shit shredder//
The fear I produce in a single vain//
Leaving your ass lose, like your bitch gone insane//
Who’s to blame, for this mass slaughter//
No offence, but you're acts like a spoilt daughter//
I caught ya off guard now, dropping my fist, hear ya cheeks sound “plough”//
Incredible punch lines for your ass to invert//
When it comes crunch-time, your ass gets hurt//
Like a bitch with no spare-time, you may as well, give up…

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Proclaimed to the name 'IgnoRance'
from illness 'DeliVerence'

well this verse ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^was str8 stupid
i'm pretty sure you aint gunna win with that

some of your lines made absolutely no sense !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!

iight.....

i will "Cremate (cream ate)" This Fool In Raps.............//
Tongues Frozen Like I'm Spittin Blue Bell, This Impotent Faggot Drops As I "Size Up" My Opponent,Like "Insecure Males" // [1]


Killin Wit Word-Play Like A Vodo-Chant, Who-to-Rant,'Smoking' dis 'Herb' like you-a-plant//
uncool-Ta-Crash On My Topic, I Leave this Fool-To-dash as i Put Out Ya Heat Like Pool-Ta-Ash//

im about to "Bury" dis young-feller, n leave him "Trapped Underground" like 'Livin in Dungeon-Cellars//
have'm hung-on-pillars, ta murder dis cat n put *VISIONS to Rest*, like *Retired Fortune-Tellers!!*//[2]

hate to tell ya, but the closset u will ever get to winnin this battle is a myth//
u can say i 'pushed u aside' the way im 'moving shit'// [3]

You best proceed with caution like a 'bank' gettin 'robbed' by an 'ex con'//
Dogg...If victories are floorless then what are are you gonna land on?// [4]

shit dogg... you should have known I come sicker than cancer black//
Next time you say wassup, Ima lay your ass out let you look up in the sky, And you can answer that// [5]

fuck yo... dogg i just slautered ya, i finished this shit.....//
fuck a "punch".... i just detached your "arm" and "threw at ya your own fist"// [6]

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i messed up my numbering.... i accedentally skipped ova the 2nd bar and labled the 3rd bar the 2nd one.... dont really matter but............

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I flow fluently, like an ocean filled with blood// it’s a conspiracy to even see me, drop with a thud// acting all thuggish, like it was your criteria// I’m like a mouthwash to get rid of this bacteria// (1st)

Subliminal mind play, for your mind to take on// critical line spray, I still have full use of my arm// holding this mic with a attitude problem// stop chatting shit, you’re the one holding a shot-gun// you pulled it too late, you missed your shot// it’s easy to fake, something your not// getting your bitch boys to back you up// shit I don’t need to employ company, I’m already standing tough// (2nd)

Like a pussy with a nerve, you coward away// let my lines do the work, like an Uzi I spray// all venom n hurt, time to put this clown away// if you can’t wear the shirt, you better sit down n pray// pray I don’t burn you, like a cynical inferno// shit this is battle is predictable, the winner is. Psh they all ready know// (3rd)

Bring all your guns blazing, straight in my face// this is a one way junction, you’re the loser in this race// taking up 2nd place, like a true defeated chump// with a black eye swelling up, from a thunderous thump// (4th)

Shit, this battle was easy I didn’t have to do a lot// I just rolled my sleeves up pleasantly, and put down a heavy drop// hit your head measly, now you suffer from a clot// I’ll leave the 6 bar cheaply, for it seems you don’t have a plot… (5th)

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Proclaimed to the name 'IgnoRance'
from illness 'DeliVerence'

what the hell.... u can only post a verse once

u already posted.... everyone voting on this shit disreguard this post.....

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see this right here.... yea.... thats your verse... u cant post anotha one.... ok....

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come on yo dont sleep on this............

need some votes

uppin............................................. .

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man this was a pretty weak battle but EnVy took it beacause he didnt repost a different VerSe but he had tha Flow and strutcure

aiight Peace (v)

VoteEnVy SKiLLz

yo thanks for the vote but u forgot to do the poll.............................................. .........................

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opening-envy
flow-envy
metas-envy
punches-envy
multies-envy
wordplay-envy
enjoyment-.none
structure-envy
closing -envy


shit battle.
other guy was newb.
hit up battle pole.

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