10 lines
35min.
blah.
who go 1st?

yo this nigga whack "johnny" can "C' anotha loss//
cause ya raps incomplete like a big mac w/o da sauce//
ur whack 0-2 makin threads sayin ur whack dats sad//
cause ur gettin a bused worse tha kids wit drunk dads//
when it comes to rappin u should quit like drugs//
cause i'm walkin all over ya ass like a door mat rug//
u can get wit ya dumb blah comments at tha end of ya posts//
i'm like vince cater when he dunks cause my rhymes go coast 2 coast//
i smell pussy like i'm fifty cent said to ja rule on a diss track//
in this battle u can be a nuclear bomb and still wont have an impact//

lyrical! 1-87 is the score dat u'll get//
if ya try tah hit me w/ fake threats that're worth shit//
cuz YOU'RE tha motherfucker in dis rap that's whack//
you try tah talk smack, an I'll smack yer ass back//
cuz I-- know yer whack, an can't stand tha fact//
that I'm STILL better than you wit a (battle)record like that!//
you stupid fuck, yer like a pair of jeans wit out tha denim,//
you're a rapper dat can't rap, you're a snake wit out da venom//
still, fuck it, it ain't nuthin that u're a friend who won't befriend 'em//
i'll leave ya bruised in tha gutter, ya letter sender who can't send 'em!//

quote: "yo this nigga whack "johhny" can "C" anotha loss//"
-Lyrical 187

yea... um, by the way... i'm white.

aight, evrybody else, time for tha votes!!!! i'd really appreciate them, so that's why I'm UPPIN FOR VOTES (1)))))))))))))))))))))))))))
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Shit I am new to this site and everything so if I could vote I would'nt becuase it is hard to see who won this one they both had good rhyming sceme and they had good closures.

uppin 4 votes
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Lyrical 187 came with harder punches and better flow

Still a very weak battle though...

Check here for REAL talent...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91823
and
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91813

uppin 4 votes
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Flow: Lyrical 187
Multies: neither
Opener: Lyrical 187
Finisher: Lyrical 187
Structure: tie
Personals: Lyrical 187
Punchlines: Lyrical 187
Metaphores: Lyrical 187

Overall: Lyrical 187

Now return the favor y'all:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90886

Opener - Lyrical
Flow - Lyrical
Punches - Lyrical
Multies - none
Personals - Lyrical
Structure - both
Meta's - Lyrical
Finisher - Lyrical
overall- lyrical 187 took this battle

return the favor and check out the battle below...

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Shit I know who to vote on this one if I could it would be lyrical 87 no doubt he came in with a good introduction and had good flow and one hell of a flow.

thanx ya'll i'll pepp ur battles asap
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OpenerL: Johnny
Closer: Lyr
Flow: Jonyyn
Punches: Johnny
Personals: Lyr
Win: Bery very close call. Neither of yall spit your best. Please someone hit this site up when you can. It's been sleepin foreva. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91312