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The Omen
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posted on blunt mc ,potient ,and snake eyes.....................
HOOK: its the O~M~E~N- the prophecy forfilled the legends- where the saga begins in end the O,M,E,N from hell to heaven-satanists and revrens judgment to you non believers say your amens. the say a great leader rules with an iron fist- thats why i spit iron bits when i flip- mic scripts. this aint a song its a dictatorship- my words are law each verb is punishment. these m.c.'s are just a embarassment- trying to fuck with me till i fuck em back.... now they file for sexual herassment. i warned you through omens-but you were hopen- to burry me………… to underground coverage like i was in a coffen. yet as long is there is life in me…. the heart knows no stoppen- from me spitting tobagens of jargen- and hitting you with lines so phat… you die from artery cloggen. with the change of seasons- I give rappers a million more reasons To hate me cause I be composen- cold wars that leave m.c.’s cryogenically frozen. Yeah you herd right if by now you callen me an asshole- Its cause you getting shitted on by a diariatical flow. See one the words are placed in print- Your loss is recorded legally on document. When its copy writ- you’d have to pay me to change it. You think your better then me? Inconclusive but I can prove it…… .Area 51 and hangar 18 are the hosts for alien cryptology- But my brains the home for extraterestial technology. That why i dont battle non major m.c.’s.Realistically…… why should I play with someone who aint in my league? Imagine me waisting a rap or beat on some dumb fuck- That’s like telling professional athletes to take pay cuts. if the sun and earth collide.and its my time to die- burry me ass up where i lie- put my logo and binochulars to my side- so i can look ahead to leaving the world behind. I refuse to subside with intellectually denied- So I fast forward eventually pissing you off… to this present time. HOOK: its the O~M~E~N- the prophecy forfilled the legends- where the saga begins in end the O,M,E,N from hell to heaven-satanists and revrens im judgment to you non believers say your amens. I slay mens and fems –gays and lesbians. Non centz bitch I am the omen. |
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yo shit was hot, nice multis, great structure, wordperfect is a good way to describe it, you jus showed me what true textual lyrical dexterity is, u jus made m a better rapper thanks....
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Worthy of awe and praise Respect "..Very nice..Very emotional...real Deep piece..I really enjoyed reading this..there are few good writers on this site..and I think they are good cause simply they write some good shit..but..rarely I enjoy reading a piece..but..this was fantastic..peace.."
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good shit man, i liked your flow and your rhymes were fire, you had elavated vocab and great flow, it was a great read, and our collab do you want a different verse? or is that 1 fine? that i sent you...anyways good drop keep it uop man
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yopur verse was fine im acquiring one more body for it to amp it up even more but your verse is great dont swet that
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this was some serious shit man, good read.....your use of vocab shon on this one......overall i cant really pick a fault, but i thought the hook was a little weak compared to the verse, but it was still decent enough......i saw your reply in mine, for a collab, im up for it...if ya wanna PM me with sum details...aight....peace
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uppin and thanks
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uppin this
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UPPIN
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