grotesque - change of heat and mind
yungone - young style
D.I.G.z - slow ya role

[Deva]
You can draw on them and grow stronger, ‘life experiences’
Its all meaningless if ya don’t elevate, an inconvenience
Cos im seeing things life brings alotta deviance
Like back stabbing mates, hittin hard deeming ignorant
As you learn you think, growing brighter like a filament
But if ya diligent you’ll learn quick, without an ego dint
My reasoning is believing in good times extending moral glints
Like flints illuminate, times with ya mates to steamy dates
Character building through living you should celebrate
Ya had the luck to do it, others die then still have to wait
Aint no perfect template to create only what falls on ya plate
Mate, through the bad times you look back at the good times
Coming up with one line, lines from ya past, to cure crimes
Like thrown dimes, ya picked up with experienced minds
Its what makes us human, capable of learning refine to define
Becoming corrupted with visions of past worthy without decline

With life’s experiences come many things
Some you like, but bad times the good sometimes brings
Strengthen dexterity with experience’s wing
Like yin and yang as a package with the odd brief fling

[2 rich]
THere are so many troubled expirences through-out yur life time,
But you'll neva beat tha struggles unless you find tha right time,
to sit and think about tha decisions you have to make,
loosin homies and all tha otha risks you have to take,
cause there are some backstabbers that are ready to react,
So you better make yur decisions...cause yous about to be attacked,
By tha trials and tha tribulations of man kind,
Imbeadin lies an' story's that are agravatin yur lost mind,
But eachday you find yurself growin and gettin stronger,
Overcoming tha problems and there's pain no longer,
Now you waitin for yur next expirience to hit you,
But you'll try to conquer it like tha past ones that missed you,

Awesome Collab, You Both Had Great Metas And Emotional Description, The Flow was On Point This Piece Had A Great Meaning, Keep It Up,

Could You Check Out "Amature Lust" Thanks Pz

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Aiyyo I like this. This was decent piece from tha both of u. Both had a tight verse and sum tight metas. I wanna see sum more from u 2 guys. Keep droppin shit like this. Lataz.

Yo thanks fo tha feedback yeall really appreciate it uppn........................

nice collab. good use of metas and great flow.........Keep it up!

can u check out my battle below....

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Honestly 2 rich up ya vocab.....other then that structure was there both flowed nicley the vocab on 2 riches side was the only flaw i really saw...


7/10 mics

thnx poeple............appreciated and noted.......

c'mon yall keep tha feedback commin........

its droppin and there aint been much...hit it with sum more plz dawgs.....Pc

Nice collabo, the structure of your writing is easy to follow, and I liked your use of words, and how they were used to express the points u were trying to make...keep em commin'

Ok I peeped. Your a Gasser!

I though this was pretty good overal, worlplay was a little simple but you pulled off the right to the point feel of it. Both ya'll hade a nice consistant flow to the verses....
Good shit...

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thanx for the comments dawgs....especially the good....ones....lol......Pc.........

Yeah i agree...this was a good collab....both parts had good flow i thought, didnt really get off at all really...Deva had nice vocab, 2-Rich should up his vocab just a little but it was still good though in this piece...both had nice metas in there...overall this was a good read...Keep at it...and keep dropping.

Liked the whole topic, really good spit.. Keep droppin'

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