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A loving passer by
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All I needed is a simple hug and kiss goodnight
A “I love you” and a “Everything will be alright” That is what helped me sleep tight It kept my light in sight Without it I couldn’t breath I wouldn’t be, no more of me Couldn’t you see how much you mean? Couldn’t you see you’re the girl in my dreams? Were things as perfect as they seemed? I keep you close to my heart I ve loved you right from the start You said go I was gone Even if I knew it was wrong And now I re-live it through my songs The days were short and the nights were long But everything was all right when you were by my side You forgave me when I lied You loved me cause you knew I tried You held me when my hopes died And you helped my tears dry And I didn’t ask why Cause I knew it was your time I waved goodbye And as hard as I try I know ill never forgive myself For letting you pass me by. |
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this was just.. wow
full of off the wall ill emotion.. the flow was there.. personally i think this is one of the best things i've read.. nice job.
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thx alot...i appriciate the feed back
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IP:
Wow. I agree with Ayngel. I think that this is one of the best things that i have read in a long time. Everything was great on here. No complaints. You had a lot of emotion in dis and u hit me right in the heart with it. For that, I give u the upmost respect. Awesome job. Im looking forward to reading more of yours. Keep em comin. Most respect.
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