10 lines/
check in; once you check in you have 15 minutes to post; you get first spit/
once you have posted i have 15 minutes to post/

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his name is Atticus, he makes a big fuss//
When I give him his first loss//
even tho he won't admit it//
with a name like that you know he can't spit//
making this my first win, i'm gonna throw it in ur face//
these rhymes aren't ma full potential its just a taste//
when you lose you try and make a cause of loss and point a blame//
this battle will go down in records hall of shame//
ur a disgrace to white rappers, eminem frowns upon you//
don't forget the vanilla ice he sucks but he hates you too//
gonna end this battle and see your reply//
just so you know a loss is better than a tie//

Ur notin' but some15 year ol' white boi tryina spit out sum rhymes/
Even before boxin day ur shits only worth dimes//
Haven't had a bitch since you was in fourth grade/
Ya just scater 'em like ants runin' from a can o' raid//
Your obsession with mens dick sizes can't be healthy/
Neither can the way you sneak into little boys rooms at the stroke of 12 stealthily//
Dick wipped by his bro' whos 30 an' still lives wit his mom/
Ur notin' but afganistan, an my words are a bomb//
It's garbage day an guess what; im takin you out/
I'm sorry princess but ya can't do notin' but sit there an' pout//

ok A77icus took this shit with no problem better word play and better disses thou bolth could step it up but good job bolth of you for you 1st battle we have seen alot worse for 1st battles aight Peace

vote = A77icus

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good battle a77icus, better spitter won, you had some great punches in there, well good luck in future battles and when i get more practise ima call u up

atticus took this one wit better wordplay and flow
my vote=atticus

but hey dont sleep on dis hit it up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=92127

Open- A77
Metas - OR
Creavitity - A77
Personals - A77
Flow - A77
Finish - A77
Dek's Abuse Meter- 8.5 for A77, 5 for OR

vote = A77

My Battles:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92298

gj good luck to you too man, after sum practice we shood spit some shit together again, hope to see you then.

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opener:a77
closer:Tie
wordplay:Tie
structure:Tie
punches:a77
overall:a77


jus keep elevatin peeps,
aaiight peace



plz vote honestly on the battle in my sig!!!!

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didnt really like original's verse...no real punches or wordplay

atticus came aight and takes almost every category
punches
wordplay
structure
creativity
overall

keep spittin..late