Aiyo these be the rules:
10 lines
no biting
Spit at the same time
.....and all the other mumbo jumbo.

Im gonna be checkin in at 1:30pm.
You better be oon the time Okay!!!!!!!

checking in...man i doubt we'll be on at da saym time...so i'll spit some time soon
gud luck
peace

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i'll put wot i mean in brackets next to da line to make it clear.

yo here we go

yo geek, u gotta get ur information right
like ur rhymes im dismantling life(meaning i tear apart his verse)
providing percise beef to distinguish time(battling dis clown to waste time)
relenquish life and tear apart ur rhyme
in do time, i mean by the end of my lines
u will fall like u wud to da sound of a nine
your the only MC that graduates with a scholarship(hes a scholar)
and the only mother fucker who masterbates over a horror flick
so when I end this beef, i'll leave you dead and bloody
and i'll end it all here so you can go to bed and study(once more i diss him being a scholar..)

done, ur turn..u got 2 dayz to spit..
gud luck

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Callin you out to battle was kinda pointless,
with them wack ass verses you spit, i've 'ready won this//
only punch you swung worth ducking was the one bout goin' to bed,
lucky for me i dont have a step-dad, in mine, nagging for head//
Big ass words you wrote trying to sound sophisticated,
when all you sound like, is a whining prick that just got castrated//
hoping those complicated words you spat will get you elevated//
you faggot, all you capable of spittin' is you fathers cum,
it must have sucked getting a sagging dick shoved up your bum,
its only too bad, in this battle, i was second to none.

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you aint ready for this

i've spat time to get votez

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you aint ready for this

Opener: none
Closer: ferr
Flow: ferr
Punches: None
Personals: Fresh

That was awful, both yall need ta elevate. Hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92619

My bad winner: ferr.............................................. .................................................. .....

man deres no poll on dis u dumbass..and u a scholar
aha
i'll re post dis whole thing and ill send u da link

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shit i forgot hahaha

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you aint ready for this

NO POLL. MOD CLOSE THIS THREAD PLEASE.

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you aint ready for this