Damn. . Seems Like The Sentimental Pieces Are My Steez. . This Is For The Lost Souls. . You're Truely Missed.

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Nights The Tears Escape
Frights, Fears, Keep Me Awake
Death To Those I Love, Damn
Only Positive Is I've Become A Stronger Man

Grandpa, I'm Flirtin With This Knife
Hurtin In This Life, Wanna Bring Curtains Over Strife
Certain That On This Night, Suicide Is The Only Option
I'm Not Stoppin Till The Pain Subsides And I'm Inna Coffin
Maybe That's Drastic, But Ya Death Left My Ass Kicked
My Cries Frantic, Pa, This Shit Is Too Tragic
I've Made It A Habit, To Pen Emotions Down
I'm Coastin now, Words Bring Toasters Bound
To Shoot, Maybe I'll Die While In The Booth
I Know The Truth, But I Still Can't Accept
Cause Ya Death Kept Stress On My Chest
My Heart Is Less, Please Bless Me Poppy
And Stop Me And Cop Me Some Pleads
Yeah It Shocked Me, Knew I Should've Visited
But I Slept, Got Lifted, And Two Days Later You Died
Fuck Pa, I Cried So Hard, Shoulda Seen You in the Hospital
I Feel Your Proud Of Me Tho, Despite Shit I Do
I Spit With Crew And Dedicate My Rap Career To You (I Love You)

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Chris W. Martin, Dearly Departed
Never Was Ya Friend But I Wish I'd Started
Didn't Have To Know You Di-rectly For This To Affect Me
Please Protect These, Girls Who Cried So Hard
For Them Who I Love To Cry, I Wish I Was In That Car
Look Man, Bless Ya Girl You Left Behind
Wings To Body, Light To Mind, It's Your Time To Shine
I Write This Rhyme, Heart Heavy As Hell
CM, To Him, You Buried Man, But I Can Tell
That You'll Live On Through Spirit, Thank You
For Being A Friend To My Girls N Like My Pa, You're A Saint Too
Invisible But Breathing, Life May Have Ended
But When Ya Doin More Than Visitin Up There--
Ya Life Is Just Beginnin'
Like I Said, I Ain't Have To Know You Personally
But There's No Frontin From Me, I'm Fully Hurtin See
So Just Over Those You Left With The Guiding Light
Try As I Might, My Words Of Comfort Drift Outta Sight
Not To Repeat My Self, But All The Tears I Dealt With, Take My Life
(You're Missed Man . .)

[Chorus]

To The Infamous, Tupac Shakur, You're Missed
May You Bless Us With Rhymes From Heaven--
I'm Guessin There's Ressurection (Damn)
B.I.G., One Of the Greats, Can't Believe Death Took Ya Face
Shit, Take My Place, Erase The Fake, And Carry Rap's Weight
Big L, A Fuckin Tragedy, Man It's Sad To See You Lost and Gone
We Pay A Price, Ya Lyrics Was Dope Man, Can't Believe It Cost To Mourn
Jam Master Jay, Turn Table Specialist, Why You Hafta Leave ?
You Was The Type-a Dude I Heard That Wore Your Heart Up On Ya Sleeve
Big Pun, Punisher Of Microphones, Man I Miss You On Rotations
Aaliyah I Still See Your Face And Don't Worry, Ain't A Person Misplaced it
It's Been Said That Tears Are Words The Heart Can't Express
So I Guess The Wet Cheeks Is Just God Givin Us His Test
All Of You Words Rest In Me, It's Best To See
The Celebration Of Your Lives, As You All Rest In Peace. .


-Formula.

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Replied To:
Deva/2-Rich - Life Experiences
SinfiC- Nusery Rhymes
D-Dizzle - Fishing Trips At Shit's Creek.

I Know This Drop Is Long, But I Put Alot Of Thought, Effort, And Emotion Into This. Feel Free To Leave Thoughts And All That. Thanks.

-Formula.

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i thought this was an average drop, the structure and flow fell off at a few places......but it was ok.......the vocab was ok....yeah a pretty average drop......Pc

yo i was feelin it i liked tha last verse tha best....nice emoyinal drop keep it up overall drop 7/10

ya man I was definetly feelin ur second verse fo sho, shit touched me man and same for ur grandfather man hell I neva even met either of mine, was really feelin this drop, flow kinda fell off at a few places but who cares man, this drop definetly reaches out and ur exiting line and ur hook was tight. keep droppin bro. peace. if u got the time hit up my "7 Years Past" open mic and leave some feed. thanx in advance peace.

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Yeah i agree...this was a good piece i thought....i liked the read...it was pretty emotional...I was feeling it...the flow was pretty good i thought, off at points, but still good i felt..vocab was alright....structure as alright as well....overall this was a good piece...keep at it...and keep dropping.

Thanks for the feedback, Uppin.

-Formula.

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