whatever dawg you can take as long as you want
but why u cal me out WHO KNOWS
anywxs

checkin in ok
8 lines
normal rules
i'll spit 1st but no feeding
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i'll crash ya head into the pavement--and give you street dreams- till you seem lost!!!!!!!!
thats Dans only way he could ever b-Nas

stupid kid sayd i musta been scared of his challange/
shit Dawg!!!!!!!i'll cut my self in half -------just so this battle is balanced
cuz you aint got half the skill that i present
its like a u got all dollars but u lack-tha-cents(sense)

so stop-ya-writtin you aint a worthy op-o-sition
cuz ur position is distant ---- going againt my per-sitance
fur-instace

i peepd ya last battle --------and damn it sucked
if you beet me ---PLEASE_------ then i'll bann ya luck
Fuck this cats this wonderin what i said
DAmn he's stuck

yo put an honest vote on dis n ill repay da favor wen ur dun....... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92528 ...thx...........pz

lmao!! 1liner elevatin like a mofo's!!took you to be 1-9 but you gettin there!! holla!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thanx tonya i appreaciate that shit for real if you got aim holla at me at

kreep101
aight thanx mommy

wat was the 1st line about?


yo, You Just Another Little Freak, On The Beach, Getting Hit By A *Rock*.
1 Line Wat A Rap Name, Punch To Test My Aim, On This White Boy In A *Frock*.

Your More Of A PuFF Than A SweeDish *AssAsin*,Wid A Foreign *Accent*
MatterFact! You AS Fake AS The Nose On Micheal *JackSIN* That "RB" And "Baby" Blanket'S (the baby hanging over the balcony) Heads Hav Fallen Off From *Laughing*

1 LIner! It tAkeS me 1 LIne, And Your Record States That You've Been *Beatin*
The Weak PunchEs Ive Eaten, The polls Fixed! The Only Way You'll Be Winning Is *Cheatin*

Oh Shit WAit! Heres My One Line,(in my 6th line) Forget The Lst Rhyme, lOOk!!! 1-1 it's my battle *Record*.
UHH! UHH!(his mum Nxt Door)Thats The Smell of Success, And THe sound Of me N Ur mum Up On tHe *Head* *Board*

uppin *1
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ya name is DAN-B_NAs
And street dreams is a nas Album
so i said my line
i'll crash ya head into the pavement--and give you street dreams- till you seem lost!!!!!!!!
thats (Dan)s only way he could ever (b-Nas)



Hend DAN BNAS

UPPIN WE NEED VOTES MAN............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .....................

opening - 1liner
flow - 1liner
punches - 1liner
personals - 1liner
structure - 1liner
closer - 1liner
overall - 1liner

pretty one sided battle

and yea 1liner u really improved...

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aight 1liner took this one much better than past battles good job Holla

vote 1liner

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=91613

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uppin for tha KO................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........

Open- 1Liner
Metas - tie
Creavitity - 1liner
Personals - tie
Flow - tie (both could be better)
Finish - danbnas
Abuse - tie

vote = 1liner

My Battles:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92417

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92568

1liner had a couple played lines..but he freaked them a lil..
betta punches...disses hit iight...betta flow..nice wordplay
on the name...

ban was ok..he had a couple played bars also..disses were mediocre...flow was kinda off..basic punches..bad opener..
bad closer...

vote 1liner