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Old 11-18-03, 12:32 AM   #1
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Rappers Done Gone Soft

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5600#post915600


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Biggie, Pac and Em' were the last of the realist,
All these bastard-ass-wack-cats like Ja' couldnt feel this,
The games done lost all the emotion that was in it,
What ever happened to rappin exactly what you feelin,
yo, these new rappers gon' soft... gon' soft... gon' soft....

aiyo,
We got these Big Timers poppin off at the mouth bout thier 20 inch rims on thier benz,
Lil wayne's gon' crazy and forgot bout his friends while Juviniles name just flat out doesnt fit,
Hardcore rhymes seem to cease to exist, Em's the only known rapper that spits what it is...
Even 50's dope rhymes seem false at heart, thats why after he drops on the charts his shit falls apart,
Moe's screwed from the start and never should'a drop'd his bars, even a bat to his back couldnt make em drop hard,
What ever happened to rappin with emotion like sorrow, and worrying whether or not you'd be dead by tomarrow,
All this braggin's made me think that the games done gone soft, and what was had was lost,
If Biggie and Pac saw what was going on, it would be the only time that thier words was lost...
At the end of it all there aint no reason to keep rappin without beef from killin or even kidnappin,
So get this beef to grillin n' make some shit happen, so when tommarrow comes cops will be wipin up blood wit a napkin


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Biggie, Pac and Em' were the last of the realist,
All these bastard-ass-wack-cats like Ja' couldnt feel this,
The games done lost all the emotion that was in it,
What ever happened to rappin exactly what you feelin,
yo, these new rappers gon' soft... gon' soft... gon' soft....



So much for a music that was made for expressin your depression and misery,
These rappers aint never had trifed lives, only the reminiscing of rich memories...
Theres no more dissin or even pissin off enemies, So whats left to seperate rap music from contemperary?
If Trick Daddy's supposed to be a thug, then Ima slug waitin to be busted,
Personally I think he's just sugar coating his life, like a pie being topped with custard...
Cause honestly it bothers me that all these "real rappers" are just actin an posing,
Rappin bout clothing and say their blasting any cat that they think is imposing...
All they care about is their cash flow, Jewelry and just maybe their reputation...
So I'm writing this argumentation to get you to appraising and examine thier bullshit and be pushing their face in,



<hook>
Biggie, Pac and Em' were the last of the realist,
All these bastard-ass-wack-cats like Ja' couldnt feel this,
The games done lost all the emotion that was in it,
What ever happened to rappin exactly what you feelin,
yo, these new rappers gon' soft... gon' soft... gon' soft....

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Old 11-18-03, 11:15 AM   #2
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could I get some fuckin feedback...
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Old 11-18-03, 11:20 AM   #3
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yea ya shit was hot dude, wit the rhymes and shit, but there is other real rappers out there besides them i understand where ya comin from though but what about fucken jay z the greatest, even nas speak truth but keep postin shit dog its hot
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Old 11-18-03, 11:31 AM   #4
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^^props^^ thanks for the feedback... I only went off on a few
rappers that brag... I didnt mention nas for the fact that he's still real... along with Bone Thugs and a few others....
part 2 will be comin soon on this...
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Old 11-18-03, 01:25 PM   #5
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i felt it no doubt you improve more everytime i read your work and i see now you have alot you cant teach an m.c.
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Old 11-18-03, 01:31 PM   #6
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What you sayin is true...which is why I like it.
Lines were long...some could of been shortened but the flow and the vocab made up for it.
Good drop.
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Old 11-18-03, 11:52 PM   #7
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thanks for the feed... UPPIN!!
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Old 11-19-03, 12:14 AM   #8
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Ok Piece Man. You Had The Truth, So The Piece Was Great Is That Perspective. Everytime I See Your Drops Tho, I See The Same Gripe Man. You Need To Work On Structure And By Doing That, Ya Flow Will Become Natural As You Keying And Will Be On-Point. Other Than Structure Problems, The Piece Was Nice. Good Vocab, Nice Multi's Thrown In. Keep It Comin Man.

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Old 11-19-03, 11:21 AM   #9
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thankz for da props and the constructive criticizm...
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Old 11-19-03, 11:57 AM   #10
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The lies were really quite stretched on this, maybe try to add inners in this, or, you could make the line shorter, this seemed extremely payed & you didn't seem to bring any new oncepts, not a very good piece, at all.
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Old 11-19-03, 12:58 PM   #11
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i thought da concept was a lil simple and not quite unique but u brought out some good points and u kept it real on how u feel about hip-hop now adays which overall makes ur piece real nice cuz u did exactly what u want rappers to do and thats bring emotions out on there rhymes and be real to be able to speak about how u feel......tight work dawg i think it came out nice and i would like to see some more of ur work!

illest line in my opinion: "Even 50's dope rhymes seem false at heart, thats why after he drops on the charts his shit falls apart,"
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Old 11-19-03, 01:06 PM   #12
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Pac and biggie r on a whole different level then em...
em is hot but he aint at there level yet...
fuck u mean big tymers and juvenline and them cant promote there riches, i bet if u was on there game had there money u;d spit it equally..
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Old 11-20-03, 11:32 PM   #13
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
I mean... that... If I had 3 million dollars... yeah, Id dress nice,
drive a nice car, and live in a nice house and support my girl and
our baby...
But I wouldnt go on makin songs BRAGGING to all the poor folks
that I had more money than them and besides, rappin about
your benz, your rims, your necklace... its bullshit... Rap was made
to let you annouce your feelings... NOT to BRAG ON SOME BULLSHIT CONCEPT...
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Old 11-21-03, 11:38 AM   #14
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