no d.r.
no bite
no feed
no hate
no crew
no prewritten

10 lines max
Due 20 mins after check in

gOOd LucK!

btw, u spit 1st...
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Jay-R sounding like a rip off the old Jigga//
Nigga, to beat me, Ur gunna have to spit quicker//
I’ll rip ya, from limb to limb with hypnosis lyrics//
Bitch, did u read the forum rules? It said no “GIMMICKS”//
How the fuck did u get in? Ripping a name of a pioneer, just to start spitting you bitch ass queer//
J 2 da A-Y.. Followed with an ‘R’// nigga u need to take your shit to a forum named the” gay bar”//
Don’t get me wrong, I don’t discriminate, but with these few lines, ur ass will be “eliminate-D’, re-arranged in a way of a genius//
R.B doesn’t need whack emcee’s it needs “REALNESS”

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from illness 'DeliVerence'

Aight, I aint got much time but here goes...

That shit blows, like he ejaculated those words with both his hands
I'll throw his verse towards the ceiling so we can see shit hit the fan
Set-ignorance...don't ya know that means you got a lack of education
Flow was childish, I thought I was readin a script from text animation
His skill is like loose change because it doesn't add up to a whole lot
His style, like Pac is shot, makes Justin Timberlake's rhymes look hot
Someone rename him to white out cuz he trys to cover up the facts
But he already proved that he's whack and how much his style lacks
I don't wanna murder this kid or his rhyme so i'll let him go this time
And it aint necessary, cuz he shot himself with each one of his lines

set ignorance kinda has potential.

but

jay-r had better flow, stucture, and punches.

giving him the win.

yo could u please hit this up wit an honest vote plz thanks dogg. http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...?threadid=91956

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Thanks 4 your vote...
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Overall=Jay-R

opener:jay R
closer:jay R
wordplay:tie
structure:tie
punches:jay R
overall:Jay R


aiight, nice battle, both u peeps evenly matched, good battle.



plz vote honestly on the battle in my sig!!!!
its gettin slept on to death.

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wack....hate seein dudes with like 250+ posts with records 5-0 battle a 0-2 newbie...with like 60 posts.......thats just not cooll.........jay r easily here...better everything...battle was blah though

both need major elevation

but J-R takes this with better wordplay, flo and structure

Vote=J-R

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=2
^drop an honest vote there!