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A Lesson In Love

breath tickles skin...creating amazing sensations,
slowly to begin...building up to the elation,
gently stroke...each inch of her heavenly physique,
slightly provoke...so her pleasure is very unique,
reach the brink...then abruptly stop just to tease,
human instinct...to search and find how to please,
lovers connected...on a higher emotional level,
physically perfected...each enjoys the revel,
relish experimenting...finding new ways to heaven,
touch unrelenting...together seven eleven,
feelings brewing...ready to eject & overflow,
theres no subduing...the screams about to explode,
intense pressure...searching for an outlet,
without measure...causing a breakout of sweat,
ahhhhhhh finally...tension eventually released,
the big finale...receptiveness increased,
warm feeling...picture the perfect scene,
face revealing...emotions usually unseen,
sensually aware...after the care she receaved,
quick prayer...hopes this feeling will never leave,

nice shit nut whats up wit ya record ya skills demostarte better than that

I dont battle much......im more interested in topicals. if i do battle its just if im bored or someone pisses me off.my last battle was a topical battle and herbs voted against me because of a lack of punches!!!!! anyway im not really fussed about my record....skills are not determined by a record.theres your answer. lol. thanks for the feedback,what did you like about it?

i liked the structure and scheme of this, the flow was on point.......and you made good use of the vocab, i think this was a good piece man..........keep at it....Pc

this was tight man. I was thrown off a little but it was still tight. you used a good source of imagery which is a good quality in text. Keep spittin.

yo what up play as usual its all good, everythin was there my fav part was, "warm feeling...picture the perfect scene,
face revealing...emotions usually unseen" yo ide drop more but homeboy wants me to goto his party they just put in a dancefloor and a pole shits gonna be off the hook, ill look it over more tommorow probably, ill catch ya l8r peace

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yep that was good, nice flow and everything wass good.
feelings brewing...ready to eject & overflow,-lol

ahhhhhhh finally...tension eventually released,- lol sorry i have a sick mind.

good shit right there. unlike the guy above me^ i dont think it was a real humorous peice. i liked it cuz it was a real straight up depiction of sex and love, with detail. nice flow and good rhymes......nice to read somethin bout sex other than " i fucked that ho so hard, and then her best friend the next night"

good shit dawg.

This must be a very special girl. This was a good drop. It was more like a poem, but hey, that's cool. Nice feeling and energy to it.

Yo I replied to this yesterday so can you return the favor?

Corrupted Mind

^sure