lets go yall
15 lines
no DR,CV
check in before spit
goodluck mayn

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oh yeah 1 hour to drop your verse
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checkin in....who ever is done there verse first spits first none of that people going first just drop your verse

Battlin raedar might as well be battlin acid heads,
This kids a poser like indians wit plastic dreads,
Fuck around and battle me then stress awaits,
and its best ta state ya wack already before this escolates,
Your style is odd ta me like sodomy you a GAY prodigy,
You cleanin my dishes in the near future is how it otta be,
This aint a hospital and there isnt a cure for wackness,
Unless you have the patience to sit a year n practice,
Its so fuckin funny to see all of this bitches rap,
Battle me is just attacking yourself witta viscious act,
A cypher with you could make a man Die Slow,
I'd Rather Plunge to my death from a Silo,
In the ranks u fell like we could hear fate callin,
but i didnt push u 'DOWN' cause u was LATE fallin,

aight

ima come back but in the mean while you'll check this battle out aight

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...7689#post917689

This kid is wack,I'm about to make it a proven fact, stop trying Ja Rule stunts because you aint gonna clap back/
Point-Blank's trying to be cool like a nerd trying to fit in,buying contacts/
This kid is 300 pounds over weight now,but after this verse he's going to be anerexic/
Step back because my text will hit you in the side of your head,but give you pain in your dick/
If this was our jobs i'd be making millions and you'd be getting no advance/
You learning how to rap with skill would be a miracle, like P.Diddy learning how to dance/
I'll put M.R(mistaraedar) over your forehead got your girl thinking its some other chicks initials,now she leaving you/
I'm about to turn this into another Steven King novel,because everything I say comes true/
I'm about to humiliate your ass,and have you looking for a new rap site/
It's day time, but i'll smack your eye lids shut,got you thinkin it's 12:00 at night/
i'm deep in the set like Juelz santana,i got cadillacs on 22's like david banner/
I'm staying on top, while you going down down baby like country grammer/
take my boyz to your whip and mess up your ranger rover/
You like an old man playing a high-tech video game because ITS GAME OVER/

uppin this yall...get these votes in...i dunno i think its pretty close...its up to yall too vote..lets go playaz/////////////////////////////

aight
i felt more punches and personals MR
Better open MR
flow MR
creativity tie
originality MR

well vote MR

vote this

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=92713

thanx mayn i'm about to hit that up and give my honest feedback.......................................... ...................................

come on yo lets get at least 2 votes in here.............................................. ........................................

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punches mr
personals mr
stretched ass bars mr
vocab mr
creativity tie
overal mr

hit this up wit honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92700

peace

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MR: ur shit was all ova tha place, good than bad, than good again........but than bad again, keep it all good n u'll be much better...

i'm deep in the set like Juelz santana,i got cadillacs on 22's like david banner/
I'm staying on top, while you going down down baby like country grammer/

aight, i guess... it would have flowed better wit commas so peeps know to say it like tha song....

PB: first off...don't spit racial slurs, it won't help u, i am native american(indian) so watch it...other than that, ur's was a bit below average, tha hits were there but not comin hard enuff...

This aint a hospital and there isnt a cure for wackness,
Unless you have the patience to sit a year n practice,

^^ ok, could have been better wit tha hospital spelling "patients" instead of patience to tie tha whole bar together...

vote: it was real close but tha fact that BP (even wit tha slur) came constant gave him my vote....


yo, hit this up wit an honest vote to keep shit poppin...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92760

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sup playa aiight mayn thanx for the honest votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...............................................