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Old 11-19-03, 04:40 PM   #1
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Token/enhance Diss by me myself and me.

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enhance amazes not w/ jolting powers to fold & scour
but inability for tokens to reign into golden showers
stolen power, this bastard should be ashamed to spit
& actually bite my name enhance & get away with it?
a flamers bitch.. most likely.. fag begged me to be elite
but at this rate he's more likely to see the week..
a spree at work.. notorious dickrider.. i.r. complaints
a little white kids rap dream.. record prior is faint..
can't acquire the saint.. even called out his whole crew
but it seems that chrit already ate them as soul food...

Chrit:
Token's worthless... Only has values at side shows...
Remixin this bitches career and adding body blows...
Jack ya in the jaw... Enhance ya intellect... Talents suspect...
How the fuck can you be 32-1 and never battled a vet...
Multiple personalities... including a weekly name change...
Yet none have displayed talent... So 32 wins strikes me as strange...
Quick to flip and killa bitch... take ya text and burn the script...
Come back with a callout and ya crew ducks just Chrit...
Never liked you, got you demodded... So fucka Enhance...
Called ya out by Spitacular so I suggested a change of plans
...while your bitch ass just had to change ya pants...

Next time dont fuck with Talent...

Last edited by Chrit : 11-19-03 at 04:51 PM.
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Old 11-19-03, 05:08 PM   #2
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real nice i really dont know if this is a battle but these are battle lines for sure nice opening line:

"enhance amazes not w/ jolting powers to fold & scour
but inability for tokens to reign into golden showers"

tight but simple punches keep it easy to read and flowed tight wit some real info in it........

"Talents suspect...
How the fuck can you be 32-1 and never battled a vet..."

and nice delivery

"including a weekly name change...
Yet none have displayed talent... So 32 wins strikes me as strange..."

overall tight work but i wanna see da comback verse to this battle
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Old 11-19-03, 08:29 PM   #3
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Old 11-19-03, 08:31 PM   #4
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yo this shit was nice it was a battle verse??? but it was still tight
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Old 11-19-03, 08:52 PM   #5
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Nice feedback

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Old 11-20-03, 12:00 PM   #6
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LMAO^

And fool...just because your a mod doesn't mean you don't have to post your replies. Thats only me
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Old 11-20-03, 12:06 PM   #7
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Feeble replied to three...

Hmm...

But I'm sure as fuck not digging for them
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Old 11-20-03, 12:14 PM   #8
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Dumbass , lol, I trust Feeb's. I just like pissing him off

There are certain people I don't even check that often anymore. Like WORD~PERFECT, Masta C, Pot1ent (I can't remember how its spelt), among others.
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Old 11-20-03, 01:46 PM   #9
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enhance amazes not w/ jolting powers to fold & scour
but inability for tokens to reign into golden showers
nice opener good wordplay there to begine the torture
stolen power, this bastard should be ashamed to spit
& actually bite my name enhance & get away with it?
ooh now that was a nice punch there got him with the truth and sounded good this flowed very well this line right here
a flamers bitch.. most likely.. fag begged me to be elite
but at this rate he's more likely to see the week..
hmmmm iono the week part it seems like you were saying "weak" cuz of the elite art but none the less still was a nice punch
a spree at work.. notorious dickrider.. i.r. complaints
a little white kids rap dream.. record prior is faint..
can't acquire the saint.. even called out his whole crew
but it seems that chrit already ate them as soul food...
This whole part was good nice multies in this verse nice wordplay punches were good in this verse id give this a 8.5/10
still good jus work on sum new puncxhes u seemd to repeat sum but good job fam


Chrit:
Token's worthless... Only has values at side shows...
Remixin this bitches career and adding body blows...
nice! good multies and a great opener for this verse it dragged you into the battle verse to make you feel su emotion

Jack ya in the jaw... Enhance ya intellect... Talents suspect...
How the fuck can you be 32-1 and never battled a vet...
lol puts truthh into your verse and used it against him well
"32-1 and neva battled a vet"hah that was nice

Multiple personalities... including a weekly name change...
Yet none have displayed talent... So 32 wins strikes me as strange... kinda repetive but flipped good ive heard lots of punches off name changes but this one was pretty decent
Quick to flip and killa bitch... take ya text and burn the script...
Come back with a callout and ya crew ducks just Chrit...
jus very good line here flow still on the prowl so still good verse
Never liked you, got you demodded... So fucka Enhance...
Called ya out by Spitacular so I suggested a change of plans
...while your bitch ass just had to change ya pants... decent set up for the change of plans part but you like lost it at the part with change ya pants diddnt liek that part much but still decent job chrit this was a decent closer id give this a 8/10 needs sum work on it but still rather decent diss comming from rb's top greatest members lookin foward for sum more colabs by you two in the future

all together id give this verse a 16/20 but good wordplay from both and multies so ya keep dissing and the good work im out
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Old 11-20-03, 02:21 PM   #10
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This Was Dope.. Really Good To See More Than
Newbs Postin In Here.. Dope Piece. .Lines Flowed
Well With The Material Here.. Dope To See

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1481#post921481
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Old 11-20-03, 05:34 PM   #11
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