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11-20-03, 12:32 PM
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Corrupted Visions: And there another one goes
IP:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1332#post921332
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1343#post921343 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1349#post921349 Be it me or you or both 2 Neither can overpower addictions glue Once hooked ya cooked.. a brain-cell stew -and Through time.. the resistance weakens The grip tightens.. and ‘Grim’ starts ‘Reaping’ -Creeping through like a silenced gun Ya cant run.. loaded with the route you chose RIP.. And there another one goes…….….. Life is for living.. rebuilding not killing Peace aint a word for gravestones (rip) It atones to positive thinkin and willing -Its weak using metal.. should me mental -to settle, using brains not brawn in communities torn to embrace your foes binding brothers, but progress is slow 1 step forward 2 steps back RIP.. And there another one goes……….... Its always the same.. but we’re all to blame In our own way through wanting fame, or playing the game cos its the frame of human evolution primal urges stemming from retribution from when survival of the fittest arose RIP.. And there another one goes……Yes! Another one goes! |
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11-20-03, 01:26 PM
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IP:
nice shit homie keep droppin niceness mayne
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11-20-03, 05:25 PM
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dont sleep on it.............................peace
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11-21-03, 12:10 AM
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IP:
Yeah i agree this was a good piece....good read as well....the flow was pretty good i thought, stayed on point most of the time.....Your vocab was nice as well....good conept and content i thought....structure was alright.....Overall this was a good piece...Keep at it and keep dropping.
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11-21-03, 06:26 PM
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IP:
nice verse, got a little good hook in there. tight shit.
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11-21-03, 06:33 PM
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IP:
that was real tight. the choice of words was good, allthough you lost me on
Its weak using metal.. should me mental -to settle, using brains not brawn the end was real good too |
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11-22-03, 02:55 AM
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IP:
nice eh kinda simple vocab at begining then starts going
ok flow stayed on point maybe lengthen ure bars a little more like the multies cuz u didnt over do them like most good shit hit up my shit in my sig dog peace |
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11-22-03, 07:45 PM
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IP:
thnx dawgs.......appreciated!.....Pz
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11-23-03, 01:09 PM
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IP:
A GOOD READ AND A DISPLAY OF YOUR REAL TALENT BUT I STILL FEEL YOUR HOLDING BACK THAT UPSETS ME BUT I CAN UNDERSTAND DO A PEACE WHERE YOU JUST LET GO AND VENT I THINK YOU WILL SHINE BETTER.
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11-23-03, 01:22 PM
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IP:
thnx word, im startin one now, ill let it all out, im just starting on a few beers.... then....lettin it rip.......thnx again....oh and a seen your was gettin slept so....i just had to leave my opinion..which i do anyways....Pz..........
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11-23-03, 01:42 PM
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IP:
erace your pm box yo
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