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SS:Broken Silence
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Amy needs a payday...................checks the want ads
Circle's 'secratary wanted', no experience on demand Hair down, showed up, interviewed;well dressed man Smiled as she shook his hand.....he had another plan 'Well miss, I far a I can tell..........your clearly qualified' But I have an imperative question...what's ure bra size? A nervous chuckle, a loose belt buckle; a kid to support 'Your hired baby, now lets put the O in memo report' Long hours, late nights, days later they both got raises Amy got baby food but lost self respect, cubicles are cages He calls her into his office, 'my pencil needs sharpening' She said, no not today sir............. and I'm not bargining He laughed and said 'baby I'm gonna get what I want' Her handgun broke her silence....... In business you only get one shot! |
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Original Ill Diss - Ill-mental Straightjakit - Fucking snitches Original Ill Diss - C-Section Last edited by Walter Wall : 11-20-03 at 11:44 PM. |
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nice piece. good flow and rhyme.
good idea for a little piece though, ya got a little story going there, i like the ending. is this like womens right or something? haha jk check out my keystyle if u want |
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^thanks for the feedback
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oh yeah hit my key styles up in open mic if ya get a chance
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^done
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