Groundhog syndrome
How I feel about the world 2day
Suicidal

Ur a sweator and a bettor and chain letter sender
And you know Im better but you still wont surrender
Im better than any gem better than any hem, and better than vitamin m
Im better than all of them and even one day will be better than eminem
You do bad things and you pull bad strings
and bend peoples wings and take anything it brings
although you know that I know u still go for the doe
and you bestow each hoe a little bit of glow
but im gonna get you so that you cannot do
or even pursue a rapping debut
and u will regret ever making a threat
and i will make everyone forget
so that they will not be upset
but until I can make up my plan
youll have time to think and time to blink
but once I get to you and you see me in view
you will remember im better than you

This was ok....the flow was off at points, add some internals and multies to help that out....and watch the like length on some of those lines some are short and some are long you should try to keep them around the same length.....the content was alright i thought but overall this was ok....Keep at it and keep dropping.

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you're not.

take your ass to the wackness emergency center, quickly.

yeah that comming from some bitch with one post it means nothing. anyone else

SURVEY SAYS................
wack

let me see some of ur shit n we'll see whos wack

uppin

masta got this percise you got some work but your far from garbage

thanks. anyone else