I replied to many threads so dont erase dis again.





I'm standin tall like bein beside a midget,
and gettin nastier den eatin while peein on ur dishes,
I'm seein all deez bitchez, wishin I wasnt even here,
b4 my vision was blurred but now I'm seein clear//
it's a lotta shiesty niggaz up in dis rap game,
dat be holdin u back and takin u further from damn fame,
it be a lotta muh fuckas makin promises to u yo,
deez fake undaground producerz tell u to come to dey studio//
but den when u call em up to set up when u gonna come,
all u hear is leave a message afta da tone uuuuuuuh,


den u gotta tell ya niggaz wut happened wit all da bull shit,
and den dey get mad and ready to unload a full clip//
den u gotta go head and be calmin em down,
cuz ur nephews in da house and ya mama around,
den dey be like nigga u had made us a promise,
and u aint pull thru on it so dat mean u not honest//
when we first met ya ass we thought u had some integrity,
but now dat dis shit happened we gon have to let ya be,
aint we aint gon result to violence or weaponry,
cuz u my nigga fa real and u aint really did no mess to me//
so den I be like well if I aint did no mess to ya,
den maybe anotha time I'll be able to step to ya,
and let ya know I found somebody else dat could get us in,
he say how u know and I say cuz dat was my nigga when//
I was at IDEA b4 I dropped da fuck outa dat bitch,
and now him and his niggaz is startin to get big,
so we can go head and combine our labels wit their's,
and den well be on our way up da stairs//
of rap dat is u know how bad it gets,
when u tryna get started but some bastards is,
not feelin none of da moves u makin or da shit u tryna do,
dats why dey be grabbin on ya foot when dey see ya climbin thru//

THIS WASNT BAD BUT IT SEAMS YOUR BETTER WITH A HORRORCORE FEEL THEN THE BATTLE FORMAT I CAN READ IN YOUR LINES YOU GOT TALENT AND THIS WASNT BAD BUT I THINK YOU DO BETTER....JUST A FEELING...STAY UP TWIN

Yo thanx man I read ur shit and u got skillz to dawg. Maybe u can teach me a thing or 2. Holla

twin hit me we can work on whatever you want we are here to elivate each other as well as ourselves.pm me