Once again... anotha newbie steps up.... check in and drop....

checkin in ... lets go u know my rules 16 lines .. no biting .. no recycling hard core and i spit first .. agreed

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Spitten' The Truth In Streets Of LA

you shouldn't spit if you dont know how,
why 16 bars i could end it right now,
leavin ya wet cant push my artillery,
cause your ass will punk down like bush side on hillary,
won a couple battles now this nigga feel king,
but i aint your little sista bitch its the real thing,
niggaz suround me like i got pack o' donutz,
actin hard like a sack with no nutz,
i'm ready for new beef, i just rack cold cuts,
i'm steady with new heat that'll klack ya hole shut,
been waitin for this fag to finally come through,
but he still ain't steppin up like he got gum on his shoe,
just one fuckin inch in my zone dead man rappin,
i'm on stage, you on the floor figuring out what the fuck just happened,
i dont think you know whats really uptown,
so just find a seat down south and sit the fuck down

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Spitten' The Truth In Streets Of LA

lol wow.... nice shit... now its my turn....

-Opener-
Ive been waitin to let go all of this rage
Anotha newbie stepped up... Im outta tha cage

-Diss-
Ur outta ur range... Ur on ur enemies lines
That'll lyrically kill u wit metaphorical rhymes
Time afta time u lie about sum action....
Here's my lil bro, Wanna be Michael Jackson?
Ur like a lil girl and ur not for real
Not worth tha kill... u cant land a record deal
All these niggaz sayin fag... Y'all homosexual?
Wit ur famz by ur side, u get real affectional
Im professional... when it comes to handlin business
U have a bad mental status due to lyrical fitness
Next time fuckin think b4 u start dissin me
Cause ur lines now have ur fuckin girl kissin me

-Finisher-
Uptown? Fuck it Ima take u downtown
On Hell Lane Express... Ur 12 feet underground...

Uppin peeps....

THATS GOOD TOO .. HOW ABOUT SOME VOTES NOW .. SOME BREAKDOWN FOR THE VERSES .. ANYONE TO DO SO ?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Spitten' The Truth In Streets Of LA

this was a pretty good battle:
flow:dysphoria
vocabeadly Spitta
multis:dysphoria
puncheseadly Spitta

now this was close but i'm gonna go with dysphoria cuz i liked his structure and his flow was nice........

can we say idiot???... battles are bout punches an creativaty.... idiot... not based on flow an structure... so u need to chance yo vote to ... Deadly spitta... like me...

Flow-tie
vocab-DS
multis-Dys
punches-DS
Creativaity-DS

vote- Deadly spitta

kid cam out nice wit his opener an everything... expected more but he spit well... good battle kids

UPPIN THIS BATTLE RIGHT HEA!!!!! CMON PPL VOTE ON THIS!!!!! DONT SLEEP!!!! ITS NOT TIME TO GO TO SLEEP YET!!!! CMON!!!! VOTE NOW!!!!!

Flow-tie
vocab-DS
multis-DS
punches-DS
Creativaity-DS
OVERALL DEADLY DYS yur shit was aight but Deadly jus had an overall better verse keep elevtin

IP: 32E8 35BF


you shouldn't spit if you dont know how,
why 16 bars i could end it right now,
leavin ya wet cant push my artillery,
cause your ass will punk down like bush side on hillary,
won a couple battles now this nigga feel king,
but i aint your little sista bitch its the real thing,
niggaz suround me like i got pack o' donutz,
actin hard like a sack with no nutz,
i'm ready for new beef, i just rack cold cuts,
i'm steady with new heat that'll klack ya hole shut,
been waitin for this fag to finally come through,
but he still ain't steppin up like he got gum on his shoe,
just one fuckin inch in my zone dead man rappin,
i'm on stage, you on the floor figuring out what the fuck just happened,
i dont think you know whats really uptown,
so just find a seat down south and sit the fuck down


FLOW...6
PUNCHES..6.5
STRUCTURE..7.5
mutlies...6
vocab..6
wordplay...6
overall...38


-Opener-
Ive been waitin to let go all of this rage
Anotha newbie stepped up... Im outta tha cage

-Diss-
Ur outta ur range... Ur on ur enemies lines
That'll lyrically kill u wit metaphorical rhymes
Time afta time u lie about sum action....
Here's my lil bro, Wanna be Michael Jackson?
Ur like a lil girl and ur not for real
Not worth tha kill... u cant land a record deal
All these niggaz sayin fag... Y'all homosexual?
Wit ur famz by ur side, u get real affectional
Im professional... when it comes to handlin business
U have a bad mental status due to lyrical fitness
Next time fuckin think b4 u start dissin me
Cause ur lines now have ur fuckin girl kissin me

-Finisher-
Uptown? Fuck it Ima take u downtown
On Hell Lane Express... Ur 12 feet underground...



FLOW...8
PUNCHES..7.5
STRUCTURE..7.5
mutlies...8
vocab..8
wordplay...8
overall...47

vote...DS

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THE RESTRICTED WUN HAS ROZE 2 CONQUER.....AGAIN!


I'M BACK!!!

Flow-tie
vocab-DS
multis-Dys
punches-DS
Creativaity-DS

Spitta took this one with eEz dont call out niggas u cant break dys

Flow-Dys
vocab-DS
multis-Dys
punches-DS
Creativaity-DS
structure-tie

nice deadly spitter spit deadly. ha.
Dys i can tell u got mad potential, good rhymin skills, just gotta focus more on hittin harder. i had and have the same problem some times

my vote Deadly

Ay can anyone vote on this battle? http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=93643 That way, we can get these both out tha way.

all Cats- Ds

punches
flow
personal
vocab

dys
you got skill but you need to Up ya vocab and try to meta4s and wordplay shit always helps if you can harness it
anyways stay up

Vote -DS

plz return tha Luv
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=94164