10 lines
no crew
no hate
no d/r
u drop first

BARON GOD CANT VOTE

checkin in .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ................ Peace

Listen up yo, it's my time to spit
Here's a toothbrush mother fucker,your breath reaks of dick
it's okay, we all know your gay
But take a step back cuz its makin me sick
My lyrics leave you battered and bruised
If you battle me then your gonna loose
I dont care what you got to say, I'll spray my A-K
And murder your entire crew
Peace out mother fucker, here's the mic lil' hoe
You can stick it up your ass like a fuckin dildo

Where You at................................................ .................................................. .....Ghost

^^haha neva dat


u wanksta u from tha north but tha niggaz in ya sig rep ATL//
dogg ya whack tha only barz you'll every see in in jail cells//
my sick flowz will decease ya body and leave it a cold corpse//
My flows will rearrange ya and leave ya body full of warps//
thats kinda sad how ya posts is higher than ya intelligence quotient//(I.Q)
Ya rhymes is like missin more punches than fatass butterbean//
I will pop ya wit tha nine and leave u wit more holes den 50 cent//
Was u in a “straitjakit” when u typed ya shit cause it made no sense//
Spittin whack lyrics wit pac in ya av.. Now ur bout to fill some heat//
Ya rhymes are like most of most of jon kitna’s passes incomplete//

^^^i fucked up o well...................


UPPIN 4 VOTES.........................................

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Aight Peace

ok battle

flow=j
creativity=j
punches=j..........both had a few played lines
personals=none
my vote=j...........strait ya verse was just too basic

Johnnie took tis hands down. More creativity, more punches........ basically more thought were put into his verse. Keep writin' staight jacket.............rememeber, practice makes perfect.

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I'm a disaster waitin' to happen ya seen, but I'd rather be masterbatin' to a magazine.

METAPHORES - X_JohnnyWattz_X
VOCABULARY - X_JohnnyWattz_X
PUNCHLINES - X_JohnnyWattz_X
STRUCTURE - X_JohnnyWattz_X
CREATIVITY - X_JohnnyWattz_X
PERSONALS - X_JohnnyWattz_X
OPENING - X_JohnnyWattz_X
CLOSING - X_JohnnyWattz_X
MULTIES - neither
FLOW - X_JohnnyWattz_X

OVERALL - X_JohnnyWattz_X

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uppin 4 votes(2)
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i would vote wattz he had better punches, flow was close. that jogn kitna line was stupid though uncreative. i'll poll when i get at 100.

johnny took this other kat to basic all round beta,

vote-j

yo man get some more posts then wen u reach 100 will ya poll ya vote in my battle wiv chem, thanx!

^^yea dogg my bad..............................


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