iight heres da Rules

10 lines max....u called me out so u spit first...

you got 20 mins to post after checkin and i got anotha 20 after you

5votes
no dk
no crew
no hate

all votes must be explained

Catagories

opening -
flow -
metas -
multis -
vocab -
structure -
complexity -
closing -
overall -

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Ummm.......you answered my call out so how did I call you out??? Just like to get tha facts straight Checkin in, I guess I gotta drop now, i'll ofcourse wait untill you get on.
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checkin in........................................

____________and u made the battle offer so u spit first, thats what i ment_______________________________________

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Ayo....

You have an okay record but your still and 'unheared voice' no one 'listens'/
And I 'drop bars and rip assholes' more then a 'faggot in prison'/
Your movin 'up and out' of this site, like 'steam through pistons'/
Not completen this mission, shit, 'one legged midgets' got a better chance winnin 'ass kickin competitions'/
Like 'old ladies fallin down stairs' i'm prone to 'trip out and bust from da hip'/
'Wearin ya mom's hook up bra and breakin it' is tha only time you've ever 'busted a clip'/
I'm an 'earthquake' comin to your city, yeah 'I shook your whole community'/
Accomplish your dreams?? Yeah right you got sick just starin out tha window of oppurtunity/
There 'no immunity' for me, 'take your best shot', and relize your chances/
Cuz you hold 'as much energy and action' as 'slow dances'/



If I need to explain punches I will, yes I did stretch bars but then I but words that rhymed in half points, hopefully that will make a differance. G'luck.
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'Brace' ya self Eye Que while EnVy begin to wire-ya-grill
I got desire-ta-kill n viles-of-pills to send que to exile-wit-thrills
Make 'Hits' like 'rolling stones' and i spit boulders-say-duck
'Punches' will 'beat' your 'chest' until your shoulder-blades-touch
Eye Que talking 'sweet' and sayin i'm 'rude'....i alt-flattery
Beat me!!Crushing 'Energizer pills' is the only time Q assault-an-battery
I'll rip this 'pussy' like when i 'skin-cats' so u want ya 'skin-back'
You can't 'Eat' my 'Hits' so your left wit 'No beef' like 'thin-rats'

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Breakdown-
punches-tie
sustainment-tie
flow-envy
multis-envy
metas-envy
creativity-both
vote=envy

jus that bit more helped him....pz

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uppin #1

com on yo....need some votes on this shit.....

brix and tek thanks for the votes......

uppin 1-0

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Vote = Envy

He Had Less..But His Had More Of An Impact..Also His Flowed Much Better Addin To The Fact He Had Multz..Better Punches etc.....Good Verse Though Eye Que...Niether One Of You Had Ne Personals And What Not...But Ya Know


I Poll Voted::Envy::

thanks for the vote violent~wordz

uppin 2-0

com on yo dont sleep on this

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Heres My Breakdown-
Flow-Tie
Multies-Both
Structur-EnVy
Punchs-EnVy
Personals-Both
Volcab-Both
Opener-Eye
Finisher-EnVy
Wordplay-EnVy


Overall-EnVy

^^it wont let me vote aiight Peace Out Yall....
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yo i'm gonna give this to envy, overall better, but if the other guy had a good structure this might have been a diferent story...................
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I feel like know one understood my multi's n meta's so i'm a expain em



And I 'drop bars and rip assholes' more then a 'faggot in prison'/

bars/soap

Like 'old ladies fallin down stairs' i'm prone to 'trip out and bust from da hip'/

Old bitches fallin down stairs/ bust their hips

'Wearin ya mom's hook up bra and breakin it' is tha only time you've ever 'busted a clip'/

breakin tha clip on bra

Accomplish your dreams?? Yeah right you got sick just starin out tha window of oppurtunity/

Accomplishing dreams/window of oppurtunity

There 'no immunity' for me, 'take your best shot', and relize your chances/

No immunity/best shot or vaccination

Well I explained em that way if I lose i'll know everyone understood tha punches and I lost fairly.
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