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due 30 min after checkin

whoever drops first drops first

and
g/l
o yea

Yo

I don't wanna DO THIS--But this New Kid is ClueLess
Cuz i''ll Trash 2RICH when i blast 2CLIPS
and replace ya hat with a hole Big enough 2 say~~~~WOW~~~ NOW Thats Chewed Swiss
Its Obviously true if ya 2 rich than Ya Probably Fuckin Jewish-
LEave this to bitch drownd till he Pro-Duce-is Blue Lips
And i got nothin personal to punch with--
Bu i' am Versn a Dumb Shit --- who think he's gunna run this
till i crippled his legs os he Becomes This

I don't wanna DO THIS--But this New Kid is ClueLess
Cuz i''ll Trash 2RICH when i blast 2CLIPS
and replace ya hat with a hole Big enough 2 say~~~~WOW~~~ NOW Thats Chewed Swiss

Its Obviously true if ya 2 rich than Ya Probably Fuckin Jew`ish-
LEave this to bitch drownd till he Pro-Duce-is Blue Lips
And i got nothin personal to punch with--
Bu i' am Versn a Dumb Shit --- who think he's gunna run this
till i crippled his legs look like This

i can never get hat link thing Right
[url=http://images.google.com/images?q=tbn:LgKZGTeawnsC:www.missionconnection.org/images/mannolegs.jpg [/url]

well heres tha aFUckin link sorry bout all the fuck up
http://images.google.com/imgres?img...-8%26oe%3DUTF-8

Finnally figged it out
I hope a mod will erase the others

I don't wanna DO THIS--But this New Kid is ClueLess
Cuz i''ll Trash 2RICH when i blast 2CLIPS
and replace ya hat with a hole Big enough 2 say~~~~WOW~~~ NOW Thats Chewed Swiss

Its Obviously true if ya 2 rich than Ya Probably Fuckin Jew`ish-
LEave this to bitch drownd till he Pro-Duce-is Blue Lips
And i got nothin personal to punch with--
Bu i' am Versn a Dumb Shit --- who think he's gunna run this
till i crippled his legs till heBecome This

This cat be callin himself 1LINER


.
Correct yourself yur rhymes are MINER, your more like a 1 TIMER


You tried to come hard but it was a little to WEAK

.
I battled a NET thug ~ a GEEK, and now that I won youll go on a loosin STREAK
..
Ill try to be a little KINDER
..but heres a REMINDER,
You not from tha hood so stop talking about CLIPS

.(come to my hood an' check out tha crips)
Yur whole life is tha NET, braggin bout "IM BATTELIN FOR PINK SLIPS!!!!!!"
he be callin me clueless but yet he cant even put up LINKS


He probably cant see right with eyes looking like CHINKS...

1liner started out nice on the opener..good punches..felt the heat..kinda funny with a touch of creativity..ya last bar was terrible tryin to get that link right ..good verse tho..

2rich ya punches were weak..did'nt have much of an impact..nice flow but be a lil more creative...ya disses was basic...you had a iight opener but thats it..

vote 1liner

Real funny: the link problem,you still won this tho. Harder punches that landed, better wordplay and all. 1liner took this.
2-rich did okay too. No hate.

aiyo can you hit htis up:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94217

no hate vote.

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you aint ready for this

1liner came hard....he had stronger punches, more complex rhymes, good flow, wordplay and multis...and creativity.thats why he won this

2rich...ya verse was very basic and u didnt have good punches...need to elevate...u had an alright flow though

my vote - 1liner

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This was a pretty good battle..
Punches: 1
Flow: Both
Multies: 1
Vocab: Both
Metas: 1
Structure: Both
Overall it was a close battle but 1 took this one, Props to both though...Vote 1

1liner that brings new meaning to the phrase 'multis' (multi-pasting ya links)

anyway..... 1liners punches hit harder & his flow was tighter.
no real word-play, metas, or similes in 2-rich's verse.

vote: 1liner

I took the time now you hit this up wiv an honest vote:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94501