16 lines

first to 5

due by saturday

when they come with wack rhymes, these bitches bother me
the Talib Kwalie cd is the last time, i listened to Quality
we're missin' equality, cus im surely known better
probablly leave with more holes in you, than poorly sewn sweaters
me lose? never son, so here's the first hint
when i make your letters run and your fuckin' verse sprint
K's the worst kid, he's so weak, its tragic that i'm more great
but my shots'll hit you in the teeth, like graphic porn tapes
since you were born fake, your condition is in a critical form
he came out of the womb rappin'..his own neck with the umbilical cord
im sinical whore, but i'll be nice to this weak herb that burns
and cop a squat on you more than east asian furniture
he is slow and it shows, when i expose his sore cranium
and open his dome, like sunny days at sports stadiums

Sorry, dude. . I ran into some trouble last night which may prolong itself for a couple of subsequent days/weeks. I could only muster up twelve lines; nice verse, though.

Overall: garbage; Bean wets his pants 'til his pajamas taste it
With a flow rivaling the sub-par nature of his comma placement
RTM - go back! Truth be told, this bum's vessel will fall quick. .
& the last time he Ripped the Mike he thumb-wrestled w/ alldig
A question for Bean: can examiners construe diminished haters?
'cos you're seeing The End quicker than the new administrators!
Mr. Bean was awesome! But, my humour's both feeble & cold
Walt Disney's rolling in his grave, 'cos I just put his sequel on hold
You should know better! I'm a wolf & you're in the villain's vicinity
Dude's trials are exposed on the 'net - like Paris Hilton's virginity
This green Bean's envious. . It's true, indeed worth a giddy hunch
In sixteen his brain's fried; 'cos I'm sure you've heard the kidney punch

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vote - kolatee.
poppa bean wasnt too good.. came played in some lines, (ghod did in one or two also tho). bean came pretty alright. buthin great from either... klatee had a few good punches, hit harder.. and less played.

Real good from both, but I think Koala came with current events (I like those), better personals, and a bit harder with the punches.

Nice wordplay on both sides, was just feeling Koala's more because of the above explanation.

Poppa came somewhat played with the "porn" line, and didn't even throw a punch in the closer.

Koala wins.

Peace to both.

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Bean:shyt wus good!...punch's werent dat good work on dem,flow wusn't bad overall ur verse wus aiight!!

Koala:NIce verse!..flow wus good,punch's were deff on point n deff original!!...nice shyt keep it up!!

Vote:Koala

Reason:I feel Koala came much stronger in his verse!!......Good job pplz!!

Vote Koal

Overall better verse.........Poppa was weak........had nothin that was real hard

Quoatable:

Mr. Bean was awesome! But, my humour's both feeble & cold
Walt Disney's rolling in his grave, 'cos I just put his sequel on hold

oh, could you please hit up this battle koaltee:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96961

This was one hell of a ( ***** ) ass joke of a battle


































































try better next time