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Masta C:
Im so tired of you constantly calling me and begging for me back..
Cut the crap cause I took the slack but all I ever got was slapped…
I cant stand your voice it drives me crazy it just rattles my brain..
Don’t scream my name cause it brings me shame and this battles insane..
Cause its like you just wont quit with your shit don’t you get a clue..
We just don’t fit cause we cant commit so just go split were through..
You broke my trust for what to become a slut sayin it was about lust?..
You disgust me and I just got to let you go cause im about to bust…
So stop saying that you love when you really don’t cause it’s a lie..
So just try to apply and don’t deny what I defy when I say good-bye..

Im Not Taking Your Shit No More..
So Just Leave And Walk Out The Door..
Things wont be like they were before...
Cause im tired of living this loving war..

MC Uski:
I'm tired of You all together expecially when u put ur hands though My hair..
u never pay attention to me that why i can't see i just don't care..
u Keep asking and asking for me but u will neva go back to You...
u don't know anything about me u should just know wat u put me through..
Why don't u Listen to me So I neva get through i will put up with u No longer..
Me leaven u took alot off my Shoulderz and made me faster and stronger..
stop ringing me i will never talk to You why did u leave me for my best friend..
when i realized it i went mad about it and crazy and that was Our Bitter End...
Look what u made me do i was thinken about and it made me Crazy..
you Made him act strangley so i hit em and made em Hazy..

Im Not Taking Your Shit No More..
So Just Leave And Walk Out The Door..
Things wont be like they were before...
Cause im tired of living this loving war..

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yea..................good stuff.......liked it cos it was different....every thing on here is either gangsterish or depressin'.....nice to see summat different....reppin some lady shit, but with a dark edge....ill

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I LIKED THE BLEND THIS WAS HOT ABSTRCAT AND DIF FROM TYPICAL THEN A TWIST OF NORMALITY IT WAS ON POINT

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Lol. . What The Fuck Word Perfect, You Always Sayin Shit Is Abstract. . No Beef. . It's Just Funny. As For The Piece:

Masta C: Ya Always Have The Flow, Props For That. Your Vocab Remains Consistent Through Every Piece I Read From You. You Don't Use Too Big Of Words, But You Don't Stay Simple-Minded Either. Your Muliti's Are What Always Impress Me, So Naturally, You Once Again Have Impressed Me. Nice Verse Man.

MC Uski: I Haven't Really Seen Anything From You I Like. This Verse Was OK. Had A Decent Flow. Fell Off On This Line Tho:

Why don't u Listen to me So I neva get through i will put up with u No longer..

Vocab Was Ok, Can't Brag, Can't Complain. Multi's Were There, But Seemed Forced. But Atleast Their Presence Was In Your Verse. You Could Use A Little Work, But Over Time, You'll Get Better.

Overall: You Too Did Pretty Well Together, Can't Say It Flowed Throughout Together, But It Was A Good Effort. Keep Droppin.

-Formula.

"Cause its like you just wont quit with your shit don’t you get a clue..
We just don’t fit cause we cant commit so just go split were through..
You broke my trust for what to become a slut sayin it was about lust?..
You disgust me and I just got to let you go cause im about to bust…"

^^^^^^ Nice Shit....

I Won't Lie To U, I Was Feelin' More Masta C's Verse Cause His Shit Was More Constant & Rhymed Better.... Uski Had A Decent Verse, Too... Overall This Was A Good Collab...

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Masta C had sum good multis and it flowed nicely
MC had an okay verse

You broke my trust for what to become a slut sayin it was about lust?..
LOL dat was kinda funny yea I agree wit Keystyle I was feelin Masta C's Verse

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diss waz pritty good, not your best but diss waz betta dan alot out der ya know... id give this a 7/10

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up up uppin Feed back Yall............
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great collab, you'z came equally creative which was nice to see to talents. This piece had some very unique lines and creative wordplay good read keep it up....

peep word p'z 7 realest if you havent...thanks pz

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That was pretty dope, ive seen better from you but still pretty slick..................... id give it 7.39272 out of ten.