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pine-cone 0 0%
Violent~Wordz 5 100.00%
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Old 11-30-03, 05:15 AM   #1
Violent~Wordz
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Pine-Cone vs Violent~Wordz

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8-10 Lines

Drop Today Since You Pm Me And Said You Were Done..With Ya Verse YYesterday


So Heres The Thread..Check In Fo-Fo


Normal Rules (No D.R, Crew etc....)




Awaits You
 
Old 11-30-03, 09:50 AM   #2
da boxa
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huh, done yesterday? what..................................
.......................................... ok i'll drop in a min...................................
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Old 11-30-03, 09:57 AM   #3
da boxa
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yo ok checkin in........................ didn't know about this til just now so, here goes, kinda short notice............................................ ..............................
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Old 11-30-03, 10:24 AM   #4
da boxa
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yo, this guy calls himself viloent words, what an oxymoron,
cause his lines are bleak, weak, and played like last week!
he says he cant get girls cause he is from Uno,
fo sho, but i know, he dont get girls cause of whats below!
like a played out record your lines are repetitive,
all scratched because my skills are destructive!
with more skill than austin powers, you'll cower,
commin with lines that make you crumble like the twin towers!
like a science teacher lookin for a molecule,
i will leave you there, microscope, lookin for your tool!
you fool, this aint cool this is a rap battle,
and i'm leaving you in a sea of words with no padde!
 
Old 11-30-03, 10:26 AM   #5
da boxa
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there i dropped a rushed line, enjoy...........
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Old 11-30-03, 08:53 PM   #6
da boxa
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yo, you called me out and made me rush my rap and now your a now show, wtf............................................
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Old 11-30-03, 08:53 PM   #7
da boxa
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yo this guy has chocked there for is dq'd, shut er down..........
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Old 11-30-03, 10:15 PM   #8
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My Bad Yo...Been Busy...Was Gone Most Of Ta-Day.....

And I Didnt Rush You To Post A Verse(You Pm'ed Me..Back Telling Me To Set The Battle Up And Thats It..Figuring That You Already Typed Ya Verse But Seems Like Y a Didnt).....

But Anyways..
Do You Want To Post A Different Verse R Just Keep That One?

*I'll Wait Ya..If ya Do..If Not I'll Just Type My Verse Right Now...And Post Up..In A Couple Minutes*

Awaits Your Reply..b4 Typin *Hurry up*
 
Old 12-01-03, 09:20 AM   #9
da boxa
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yo i dont care, its not a big deal just type ya verse.............
. this poll will close soon...............
 
Old 12-01-03, 05:41 PM   #10
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How The Poll Gone Close...
But Nehow..

Typen..something now..


Tried Out For Elite...And Chrit, 13th Disciple Declined This Fo...
But Like Fat Slow Kids Waiting To Be Picked Up...Nobody Wants You...
Kid Is Through.. Dude..I'll Tell You To Catch Pussy..But Ya Might Drop It...
Its Aiight Though.. Cause Your Life Like Junk Email..Just Full Of Shit...
Full Of It..Almost Missed This? I Pmed You The Link..Did That Slip Ya Mind...
I Heard Of Moving Up..But This Dude Going Nowhere Like A Group Of Mimes..
Forget Pine..And Don't Let This (Die)t Down Kid..I'll Leave Ya Breathless...
Pine Cones Keyboard - $5.00...Internet Service $100.00..Beating Pine - Priceless..




Blah Blah..wateva vote up…

Last edited by Violent~Wordz : 12-01-03 at 05:45 PM.
 
Old 12-01-03, 05:49 PM   #11
da boxa
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yo nice finisher, but i wasn't feelin the rest, to me it just didn't flow,,, but tis aight...................... uppin................... adn yo violent you wannna join D.I?
 
Old 12-01-03, 06:12 PM   #12
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yo violent wordz got this just better structure and flow!
pine man u gotta take a lil more time lol

vote violent wordz
 
Old 12-01-03, 06:14 PM   #13
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this aint letin me vote some i can't hepl it violent wordz u would of had another vote!.....................
 
Old 12-01-03, 06:34 PM   #14
Emerge
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opener - words
closer - words...funny
punches - tie none that stood out and kinda played
personals - words
wordplay - tie
overall - words...another close one pine you aren't as bad as ure record seems you are close to being ok enough just try to be a little more witty and you shoud win some
 
Old 12-01-03, 07:33 PM   #15
da boxa
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yeh, thanks, i was rushed a lil, should have taken that second chance, but what the hay, its all good..............................
 
 


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