8-10 line, anythang goes spit ur shit playa............................................. .,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

checkin in................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..........

lets do this,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, good luck man, rock ur shit,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Watch how I make this bitch disappear like magic/
Grave stone dug up,his body in a cascatte/
This kid is about to be lunch,damn im starving/
attack you from behind,creep through the trees like Tarzan/
While you be internet thuggin i'll be in your house muggin/
He makin people vote for him because he can't get luvin/
I spit poison,you about to taste this/
got him tied up like lacess,leave him faceless/
Stop copying me punk erase the C from your name/
C-lo about to get hit high like a nigga on mary-jane/

c-rocka aka cock blocka, man hes vile
motherfucka sucks cock like its goin outta style
end up walkin that aisle while baggin groceries at super walmart
i know ur new man, but im the heater,the street sweeper,
glad to meet ya sweet heart, i didnt mean to stop u before u start
my rhymes tight like a virgin was
im slick like a surgeon when he puts on his gloves,
and its time to operate, if ur lucky i wont fully casterate,
ill leave u about half what u came in with
so that will be what about 3/4 of an inch bitch?


Fuck it Im out-

nice battle rocka, upppppiiinnnnn this shit.......... hollaaaaaaaa......................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

yeah this is a good battle mayn......uppin this ish.,............................................. .................................................. ......

.............uppin................................ .................................................. ........

uppppppinnnnnnnnnn,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, fuck lets get some votes in here

i know......i wonder who gonna take this.............................................. .................................................. ............................

Gonna break it down like this..
flow - C rocka
punches-C-Lo
multis-C-Lo
metas-C-lo
closer-C-Lo
overall- C-Lo
good battle both C-lo just spit it a bit more veteran like both of you might wanna look at some veteran battles to get some ideas of the kind of things people look for....one.

thanx dawg appreciate the honest feed back i will work on it................................................ .............................

Flow weak
Metas multies, weak
Punches weak
open close. weak

overal this was a weak battle, not bad for newbs but you could elavate in some areas just keep at it and try tobe creativer but im gunna have to go with c lo his was a tad better overal peace

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The Weathers Art
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
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can sum 2 plz vote......................uppin................... .................................................. .........................

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