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I ain't really feelin dis piece o wellz

(Verse 1)
YJ is 4eva on ya mind mami, compliments bout me won't spark a change of heart
you want me and you to be a couple again but I'm happy single for tha most part
tha chances have been sliced, I got somebody in my eye, same name but not you
even if he told me I still won't listen to chirst, be like Justin and cry me a river boo
you've been givin me hell my activeness has been iced for those 3 months in hell
it was like I was in tha penitentiary, on locked down with a telephone in my cell
you neva did make me smile, you left me wit a frown but you were my first
and I thought I've been cursed because my first relationship was my worst
but they'll be many more, I hope my next relationship isn't hell like before
I want my next one to last forever, so I gotta choose with caution and choose wisely
cuz I don't want my BITCH to do wrong like them bitches be doing to Ronald Isley
might write that gurl a few deep songs, bout my feelings for her even if I come weak
neva got a kiss from my ex but this time I'll make that new gurl wanna kiss my cheek
and I'll let her know that I luv her and care fo her, my EX...I didn't let her know that
now I'm focusin on life n lookin fo a gurl anywhere, fuck her I don't want that ho bac(my ex)

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aiight the structure was nice mostly kept constant all the way through piece.

some aiight lines, some seem to be witty and some seem to be emotion, and some both at the same time.

no a topic really, but the title untitled kinda means there wont be much of a topic.

nice drop

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thanx uppin

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