spit whateva and I'll match it.
No hate and all that stuff

HIS VERSE

CHECK IT YO YO , TAG UR IT, WHY CUZ YOU KILL IT,
PULL UR SACK OUT UR POCKET MAN IM GONNA STEAL IT,BE4 YOU NO ALREADY STASHIN,EVERY LAST SNAPPER OF UR HUMBOLT PURPLE PASSION, I SUCKED YOU IN TO MY RAP TRAP, ILL ROLL YOUR PUNKASS UP IN A GRAPE BLUNT WRAP,HOLD UP I GOTTA ASH YOU,LIKE CHUCK WOOLEREY SAID ILL BE BACK IN 2 AND 2,
LETS TAKE A SEC TO SEE WHERE YOU AT TAG,
NO BLUNT,NO SACK,
JUST AN EMPTY BAG,
YO ASS GOT FUCKED LIKE A FRISCO FAG.......POST

CHECK IT--------TAG UR IT, WHY CUZ YA KILLED IT,
TAKE UR SACK OUT UR POCKET MAN ILL FUCKIN STEAL IT,BE4 YOU KNOW IT, STRAIGHT SHASHIN,EVERY LAST SNAPPER OF UR HUMBOLT PURPLE PASSION, YOU GOT SUCKED IN MY WICKED RHYME DEATHTRAP, I ROLLED YOU UP DUDE IN A GRAPE BLUNT WRAP, HOLD UP I GOTS TO ASH YOU, LIKE CHUCK WOOLERY SAID ILL BE BACK IN 2 AND 2,
LETS TAKE A SEC TO SEE WHERE YOU AT TAG,
NO BLUNT--NO SACK--- JUST AN EMPTY ZIP-LOCK BAG,
UR ASS GOT FUCKED LIKE A 1/2 SISCO 1/2 FRISCO FAG......post

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Why'd ya call me out dawg, I'll thow ya a bone
Go chase it like a bitch (female dog) and leave me the fuck alone
Another racist person, only this guy hates on crackas
He thinks WhitesRWrong I'll drill him like a BlackNDecka
Your a pecker wrecker, cause your a homo with braces
You get avoided more them bad contagious cases

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tag takes it with a quick merkin for the newb

fool had no structure flow or distinctive punches

tag beat him, but didnt come hard...but that was very appropriate


vote tag

Vote--Tag (in one post, my vote will MEAN something!)

Umm. Besides from the fact that I didn't want to kill myself while reading his verse. Just more clever. White, try to have double meaning behind your punches or think of some clever metas. If you're going to stick with disses, try to find a way to land your punches better. Like the punchline of a good joke.

If you'd do me a favor

Meters vs. Rhymes
Meters vs. Unleashed Dragon are both being slept on. Which is gay. Vote if you have the time, thanks.

Peace

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escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

multis-Tag
flow-definatley Tag
punches-tag
wordplay-tag
closer-tag
opener-tag.....tag your it why cause you killed it....<---is that a compliment?
vote-Tag

HELLO MIC FLY,,,,,, IM A FUCKIN WHITE GUY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A BLACKNDECKER,MIC MIC RAPHONE CHECKER, I FUCK YOUR GIRL HOMIE DONT CARE IF IM A HOME WRECKER

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uppin ta get this over with .................................................. .................................................. .......

UPPINNNNNNN TIME TO DISSMISS .................................................. .............
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please vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i need votes...................
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METAPHORES - neither
VOCABULARY - neither
PUNCHLINES - TAG
STRUCTURE - TAG
CREATIVITY - TAG
PERSONALS - TAG
OPENING - TAG
CLOSING - TAG
MULTIES - neither
FLOW - TAG

OVERALL - TAG

Uppin (2) PLease hit this up quick............................................. .................................................. .............

tag takes this easy, short verse and to the point. The otha dude had commas everywhere i kinda got lost man. TAG had better wordplay, harder and quicker punches. PEACE. No hate vote.

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