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12-01-03, 11:45 AM | #1 | |
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Still Ballin'
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MP~PHASIZ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95365 levidicus http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95667 Auspicious http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95318 hey yall i was bored i like that song but i dont really feel trick daddy in this joint so i decided to put me in the song n take him out. so i put a lil verse there. 2pac feat. Prez here it goes. Straight motherfuckin ballin Part two, still ballin Westside [Verse One: 2Pac] Now ever since a nigga was a seed Only thing promised to me was the penitentiary, still ballin Ridin on these niggaz cause they lame In a six - one Chevy, still heavy in this game, can you feel me? Blame it on my momma I'm a thug nigga Up befo' the sun rise, quicker than the drug dealers Tell me if it's on, nigga then we first to bomb Bust on these bitch - made niggaz hit 'em up, WESTSIDE Ain't nobody love me as a broke nigga Finger on the trigger Lord forgive me if I smoke niggaz I love my females strapped, no fuckin from the back I get my currency in stacks, California's where I'm at - right? Passed by while these niggaz wonder by I got shot but didn't die, let 'em see who's next to try Did I cry, hell nah, nigga tear I shed For all my homies in the pen, many peers dead Niggaz still ballin Still ballin, until I die You can bring your crew motherfucker I be ballin, they wonder why (You can bring your crew but we remain true motherfuckers still) [Prez] Itz 2pac n Prez in this muthafucka, alcohol n bitches in a table playin' strip poka/ Toss me a tequila wit lime , shit we aint wastin' time, hoes wanna climb on a playa in his prime/ we ridin' round town, n never back down, cuz when we cruise its 2 killas in the loose Now be careful who u accuse ,see yo body in a casket in the nightly news/ MIAMI playa have fun wit da bomb n mix it wit some rum/ n if u see me pout be quick ta point it out / be rite back bring a bag wit a quarter ounce/ nigga roll it up ...n then we bounce [Chorus: 2Pac] Still ballin, 'til the day I die You can bring your crew but we remain true motherfuckers Still ballin, niggaz wonder why You can bring your crew but we remain true motherfuckers Still ballin [Verse Three: 2Pac] Now everybody wanna see us dead Two murdered on the front page, shot to death, bullets to the head Niggaz holla out my name and it's similar to rape Motherfuckers know I'm comin, so they runnin to they graves, watch Swoop down with my nigga from the Pound Cause {Prez} don't give a fuck, where you coward niggaz now, blast Keep pumpin, ain't worried bout nuttin Busters thought we was frontin, so reload and keep dumpin Chorus - 2Pac version 'Til the day I die Still ballin... motherfuckers still ballin Straight motherfuckin ballin Last edited by Prez : 12-01-03 at 11:54 AM. |
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12-01-03, 12:05 PM | #2 | |
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IP:
good peice...the 1st verse 2pac mentions Cali and in your you mention Miami (florida)..overall you have some good imagry..you need some more creativty.. you had a good structure.i rate this: 8.5/10
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12-01-03, 05:22 PM | #3 | |
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IP:
you idiot, this a complete bite of tupac. I know you gave him credit, but damn, you even picked a shitty verse of his.
As for the one verse you didn't take from pac, you need to work on original content. I don't give a flying fuck if you're a west side nigga, if you can't write a story or express an opinion through rap, you got nothing. Try to write about something that means something to you, not just about balling and all that asinine shit. Try to make your bars even, it helps with the flow. And next time give better replies. Shit.
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12-01-03, 05:26 PM | #4 | ||
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IP:
I didn't like the flow, it didn't work, pz and love
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