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Old 12-01-03, 06:56 PM   #1
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Watched Over

eyes scan her sleeping physique,
stroke hair,plant a kiss on her cheek,
slightly stirs,but remains undisturbed,
utters words,not clear enough 2 be heard,
time stands still,as she lays so peaceful,
comfortable feeling,happiness unequalled,
two people...stuck in the perfect moment,
fit together,holding each bodily component,
through the window,the morning sun shines,
her face glows,highlighting single lines,
picture discribe more than 1000 words could,
no amount...could make my love understood,
through problems,ill recall this image to mind,
a fault within her,is impossible to find,
thank god shes mine,our two hearts combined,
a brilliant example,the word soulmate defined,
breakfast in bed...made just to show her,
the love i discovered...as i watched over,
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Old 12-01-03, 07:16 PM   #2
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THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL NOT TO SOUND GAY BUT THIS WAS EMMOTIONAL POETIC AND DESCRIPTIVE....
YOU EXPRESS BEAUTY IN DETAIL YET SHOW THE THIN LINE BETWEEN LOVE ADMIRING AND LUSTING I LIKE THAT THIS WAS FIRE.
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Old 12-02-03, 05:45 PM   #3
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uppin...
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Old 12-02-03, 05:59 PM   #4
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damn..somebodys lookin to get laid...just messon lol

this was an awesome peace, the way you described everything and showed your emotion was great you had a great flow really showed some good talent keep it up mayn pz
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Old 12-03-03, 02:19 PM   #5
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