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Old 12-02-03, 01:26 PM   #1
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check it: 'Battle Anthem'

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yo here is my latest track man, if u got some good feedback, positive or negative, its all welcome...... tell me what u think! its called 'Battle anthem', its on top of my soundclick page: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/djwouz.htm
...and dont play it in lo fi, beats fucked up there... play in hi fi or just download it iiight

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Old 12-02-03, 08:36 PM   #2
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it sounds like u made the beat... u got a powerful voice(kinda sounds like u just screamin though), which is koo...ur flow is a lil slow, but its all good... its an ok track...
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Old 12-03-03, 03:13 AM   #3
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yeah i made the beat too..... thanks for the feedback
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Old 12-03-03, 10:28 AM   #4
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you flow is slow, and your lyrics arent the best,
you do sound like your screamin, the beat is aiight.

it could be made a lot better.
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Old 12-03-03, 10:30 AM   #5
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P.S chiil otu with the word "fuck"
or "fuckin"

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Old 12-03-03, 06:04 PM   #6
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^^^serious.... dont use it too much....
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Old 12-03-03, 06:53 PM   #7
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yeah i heard it from others too.... i kinda like it it gives that aggresive twist .. but i feel ya... its just that im from holland so this song is pretty good english for a dutch muthafucker like me .... anyway thanks for peepin
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Old 12-03-03, 10:43 PM   #8
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not really feelin this at all... I'm not goin to say anything else... get better... 1
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Old 12-05-03, 08:51 AM   #9
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hehe... ight thats cool...
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