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Old 12-02-03, 05:14 PM   #1
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Everything that I do for Pat must be refined
it seems unfair I have just one, when my cat has nine
laying on the mat was fine, because the tide washed over
cleansing me of falcities; leprachuans with squashed clovers
seem to rub shoulders with the people of my dreams
a seperate universe where the steeple is as it seems
unclean, and covered in a film reserved for Disney flicks
So I continue to be Pyramus to these Thisby chicks
taking his free Vicks to soothe my throats incessant ranting
the garden overgrows the yard, I'm a result of poor planting
Trying to give a hundred and 10% when all I possess is fifty
Forgot to get this place cleaned, but they say the mess is thrifty
are you still with me? Because this can really get confusing
you're just abusing, the brand of deodorant you're using
on our skin, to begin the day in the life we all must live in
and performed incorrectly, it will definitely fail to connect me
I hope you try to resurrect me before they try to disect me
and my essence, this presense represents exactly how you feel
yes, it may be only one life, but how much of it all is real?

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95678
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95676
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4583#post954583
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Old 12-02-03, 10:56 PM   #2
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I'm glad you guys are so grateful for all the work I put in around here.
8 views, not one fucking reply? yeah, fuck you too
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Old 12-03-03, 12:15 AM   #3
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haha, thats why your mad? cuz no one would reply to your rap? good way to abuse your power on the board makin up rules n shit, how about just practicin on your weak ass flow?
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Old 12-03-03, 09:19 PM   #4
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^if you can prove that I'm abusing my power, I'll give you my fucking mod spot.
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Old 12-03-03, 09:25 PM   #5
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dont want it, I just wanna spit my flows and have fun wit it
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Old 12-03-03, 09:26 PM   #6
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^then don't bitch at me.
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Old 12-03-03, 09:27 PM   #7
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I didn't think it was that bad bro . . .
check this out:
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Old 12-03-03, 09:48 PM   #8
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well man....

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You've got awesome rhyming skills, but I am having trouble understanding what it's all about though. Man, I'm only new here, but I thought we had to give good constructive feedback.lol. I don't see that on this thread.lmao!
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Old 12-03-03, 09:55 PM   #9
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YO THIS WAS A KOO PIECE DAWG MUCH RESPECT TO U
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Old 12-03-03, 10:55 PM   #10
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flowed well 4 me man
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Old 12-04-03, 01:07 AM   #11
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Maven is dope....

I'll do an in-depth reply someitme soon
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Old 12-04-03, 01:31 AM   #12
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that was dope maven..good to see you back..once again you didn't dissapoint..tight flow..didn't have any flaws..
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