10 lines max
no herb, dick-rides or crew votes
30 minutes to spit goes to both
...cheqin in....and g'd luck mayne...

check in u go first

you were givin a chance to advance but you failed,
you rhymes are so wack you should be fuckin jailed.
no doubt there were times when you shine,
unfortunantly that passed and now u speak like a mime.
U probably sittin in your chair pullin out your hair,
screamin "life ain't fair!".
but hey.it ain't your fault your shits,
yo mamma couldn't breast feed u cuz she got no tits.
now that its done and stoped.
the only reason u breathin is cuz i stoped heevin my thoughts.

recognized for my medlied rips i flip scripts with deadly spits
i'll burry you with "bruce" and you still wont spit dead-"lee"-bitch*
you cudnt "spit cold" with flu-bitch, am too-sick and elusive
wanna avoid this "L" then [E-lude] elude-this!
kill you so quick you'll start to bleed-in-hearse
reap this bitch everyone wanna laugh? then read-his-verse!
so sick i got more virus than mice-hold am twice bold
i'll wipe Anarctica with you ass and you still cudnt come Ice-cold

*bruce lee= hes dead....*

PS: i highlighted the flow incase some of yall dont catch it, so dont be hating on that shit....

upping...for votes.....1

damn! yall i knew iam not the best textcee in da world...but yeah....some votes can really help...hook it up man.....peace

i think e-lude got thiz, but can't vote... shit...___________________________________________ __________________________________________________ _______________________________________

shit osiruz got this......pretty good noobs are surprising me these dayz..........lol nice shit dawg.............................................. ...............

osiriz got this!
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yup he got this one im sure of it! MAKE A POLL DAMNIT!

osiruz took this easy man, great verse, real impressive. NO need for a brerakdown. Verse breaksdown itself. Peace.

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METAPHORES - ...
VOCABULARY - osiruz
PUNCHLINES - osiruz
STRUCTURE - osiruz
CREATIVITY - osiruz
PERSONALS - ...
OPENING - osiruz
CLOSING - osiruz
MULTIES - osiruz
FLOW - osiruz

OVERALL – osiruz

bla bla bla vote for my battle on sig after feedback osi got this no doubt he murked e lude didn't have punches it was just a flow but ozi you shouln't bold it no more makes your verse weaker people can understand it wit out it unless they dumb...1

i know what you mean yu bin sund...but unfortunately most people here are newbs who wont understand my style...

thanx to all of yall who has voted...

one more vote would do it here folks...

common yall show some appreciation and shit and vote please....the favor will be return to ya....

PZ

Vote Osiruz.

E-ludes sounded more like a nursery rhyme, and didn't do anything for me. Osiruz beat him in every category.

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