Just came up with this in the past 10 minutes, lemme know what you think.
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Cat in the hat lyrics or over-simplified,
You say way too much, or only what's implied.
Bad Andy's got the balls to always speak his mind.
And he gets the bass pumpin', sub-woofer electrified.

How many times have you heard the same lines?
Same motherfuckers spittin' all the same rhymes.
It's time to break through bustin' jaws and spines,
You'll never hear another flow delicious as mine.

WooHah! Got you all in checkmate.
Mr. Bad Andy shittin' on your plate.
Your face is gettin' redder, you lookin' irrate,
Your teeth is stained brown from all the shit you just ate.

Professional poets always know what to do next.
People think your album is by Memorex.
I'm an invincible typist, survivin' all wrecks.
Pretendin' rhymers all got broken necks.
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i like that pretty good no mess up to me sounds tight keep the shit going dawg very nice

shit was aight keep on postin.... keep ya head

pretty good...vocab solid..like to see it longer though..keep elevatin..

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blah it was ok...vocab is ok
flow was ok
nothing special lost focal point at times

keep elevating and posting peace

Cool as fuck to get some talk like that shit comin' after my first post. Haven't been rappin' in like a year. Used to be called Capem out in Quebec, only rapped on tapes, though. Like I said, cool as fuck.

Solid rhyme throughout, keep at it...