I made the beat too... 1st attempt at producing, i think i did pretty well..

leave feedback, i reply to you people every day.. i better not get slept on...

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^Hi-Fi

the song's called : Why Do I Not?

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tha beat its odd but crazy to spit ova...

i wasnt likin tha little hook part wit that lil piano key dum-dum dum-dum you what part im talkin about?.....


othat than that id put some stank on that beat lol....


good job for ya 1st try at it....

ok im give it to you honestly......

i wasnt feelin the beat....good attempt for a first try tho.....beat is all over the place......and it throws your flow off.....i normally like your shit .....but that beat kinda hurts my ears.....keep tryin tho

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lmao^... thx.. i know it took like 30 times spittin' this verse jus' to get it right... i'm still workin' on the beat.. i think it needs more of a melody... good looks at normally liking my shit, an' bella, thx girl.. holla at'cha man 'bout a collab.. 1

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Beat was a bit off.... understandable since its your first try at it...

Otherise pretty good track...
Hook kinda was a bit odd for me...

OVerall- decent...

And go peep my shit in here...
World is Mine...

Thanks

n/p... good looks bro.. 1

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buffering.....

lol at the beat....lol now YOU sound white, lol, its cool though...beats lame, no bass in this?.....nice multi's.....you wasnt on beat for a second, but its coo.....whoa! is that spose to be a chorus.......lmao, nah leave that alone, im talkin bout the beat.....haha......keep droppin

better than any beat i could do, thats why i stick w/ the bars. holla

damn, now i feel bad... lol... nah, 's'cool... thx for the reply on the lyrics i was waitin' 4 one of those.. good looks... 1

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lmao...... well the only way to get better to spit over ya own beat.... it was pretty bad..... very bad. specially at the chorus.... i didnt know what the fuck happend. flow was coo.

beat isnt the greatest. but you know what youre doing. now you just have to make everything mesh well. change up is good. add a few beat breaks and a second higher pitched melody.

lyrics werent amazing - but they werent horrible - nice steez

feelin your flow

keep shit up - ill keep an eye out

pz..1
-sal

yo, post... damn man u negative.. i really don't car 'bout the beat no more,,, jus' give feed back on lyrics an' flow on the beat.. i think i rode the beat pretty well since it's such a fuckin' sketchy beat.. ... i uno... holla.. 1

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hmm...the beat - woulda been aight if the kick wasn't hittin every beat....n a hard snare added in. plus the piano riff speeds up when it pitch shifts....still, for a first beat at least it had a nice kick to it.

flow was aight. sumtimes the dubs make it seem a bit mumbled. on point fo sure. chorus...haha...a bit corny but considerin u sayin u don't give a fuck...i think it works in the context of the lyrics.

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ur voice is nice... beat is gay.... but its a koo audio... nice drop...

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lmao...^ first person to ever say my voice is nice.. k-.. i'm-a keep workin' on makin' beats.. hopefully i'll get better at that too.. 1

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