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12-04-03, 06:43 PM
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De M-O-D Bruk
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rule (Soft Focus) vs LM (D.O.I)
IP:
Check In ASAP
Verse Due Dec 9th. Topic: Unimagineable Nightmares Good Luck.
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12-04-03, 07:15 PM
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IP:
chekcin in................................................ .................................................. ..
good luck LM
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12-04-03, 08:28 PM
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IP:
I'm unprepared haunted by mercyless demons
Leaving me in aginy my soul itself is screaming Trapped in a fantasie of the devils hate children I can't adapt to visons of how people killed 'em Although I close my eyes I see the lost flesh Ghost asking my dreams to resurect death Minds losing piece by piece by lose of sleep I was a rose from concrete now a lost sheep My peddles falling my medow is a graveyard Hearing souls calling think it was braveheart All because of the scene my mind repeats Over and over of sleeping with dead beats Fetish to see beyond normal who now dwell Help comunicate with souls trapped in hell Struggle in my mind why this painful torture Did I do something to provoke the dead culter Is this a blessing to talk to souls from the past A gift a chance to break the obscene glass Closing my eyes is dandersous or so it seems The devils work? Or god like angel like beams While I sleep I can't answer different questions Tryen to understand dead is my godly lessons Theres no bliss while i'm asleep i'm worried For am I even alive or actually really burried All in all thus does not matter but i'm gifted My resting curiosities I vow to keep restricted They ask me questions of how tobe reincarnated Jeezus has spoken to me an why god retaliates With thunder from the oceanly sky Every drop of rain another human dies Crazy I can hardly believe it myself Horryfing me it's preventing my good health I'm losing hold of my bodily control Let the spirites free why am i consoled Leaving me sweating grasping for air.. Good and evil trapped in my mind..im scared Unprepared i'm losing my thoughts of christ Blood over love I hate my p.m to a.m life Trully believe i encounter the spirites of god Who didn't make it hell or heavon lost in the fog I pray that these souls be free sent up stairs For i'm dieing in my sleep.... From these Unimagineable Nightmares hope this is good.....
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12-07-03, 04:18 PM
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IP:
I've just found this I didnt know it had been set up. I'll post ASAP.............................................. ........
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12-07-03, 04:46 PM
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IP:
All these devils and goblins surround me every night...
It's a relief when I open my eyes to the mornin light... Coz my chest feels tight everytime this darkness falls... The worst place is inside these 4 bedroom walls... But exhaustion calls so I've got to be brave... I've got to sleep or I'll go to an early grave... A good nights sleep is all I crave but it doesnt come... They say god punishes people's sins, what have I done... All I wanna do is run and never stop or look back... Coz it feels like my dreams have been hijacked... Once, my life was intact, I was a happy child... But that changed when my sleep became more wild... All my fears piled on to me and now I feel like I've fell... I've sliped, stumbled all the way down to this hell... And It's hard to tell If I'll ever make it up to heaven... Coz my nights have been like this since the age of 11... My membrane has been severed, and I'm loosin concentration... I hate to shut my eyes coz I know these will soon be comencin... And I'm sensin that these unamaginable nightmares... Are always gonna be there... Peace!!! |
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12-08-03, 04:24 PM
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IP:
uupin for votes on this crew battle............................................ .................................................. ...................
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12-09-03, 07:13 AM
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IP:
up................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................
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12-09-03, 12:16 PM
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IP:
uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. pz
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12-09-03, 05:07 PM
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IP:
uppen............................................. .................................................. ...................
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12-09-03, 05:24 PM
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IP:
good battle...nice reads by both
but honestly i think rule won with better metaphors and vocab that was precise...no hate at all hit this up wit honest vote please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93220 |
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12-09-03, 09:10 PM
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IP:
apreciated...but ye need ta poll vote...
uppen .................................................. ...........
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12-09-03, 09:35 PM
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IP:
ask a mod to edit the poll.............................................. ...................................
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12-09-03, 10:31 PM
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IP:
I pm'd Ed so hopefully he'll fix it
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12-09-03, 10:34 PM
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IP:
yea..........rule just had better punchlines.........and they was more consistent
punchlines - rule flow - tie structure - tie topic consistency - tie vocab/complexity - tie metas - lm opener - rule closer tie overall - rule hit this battle up honestly http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97408 vote doesnt count - punches in a topical????? i believe u didnt read. -feeble
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12-09-03, 10:46 PM
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IP:
dammit thats two of you now who didnt post a poll......assholes lol............................................... .................
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