"Rise of the Underground"

[Chorus x2]
We're the axle on which rap revolves around
Spit these lyrics like slugs, round after round
We are the kings of rap so we wear a crown
And what this is, is a rise of the underground

[Verse 1 - Rule]
Restricted Underground Lyrical Epic lost in raps mentality
Name stands for Rule means disolve the false rap reality
Struggle acumilate a base to hold a mic & stand strong
To say what you gotta say and not feel loyaly wrong
Stereotypes and unnecessary anger's always around
Provoking talented artist to a new rout an backdown
From the stage but it isn't fair there ears are caged
Word should be blazed leaven the listener amazed
Desires for youngsters in poverty was mainstream
Underground is an angel blessin the lost beam
Lord why take the game and turn the tables back
Incourage kids to write don't leave the art abstract
Undergrounds are greedie we're comen for yours
Underground rose we're destined to achieve more
Sending a shock wave that has a beat or arcapela
We're spinnin this game around faster then a perpela

[Chorus x2]
We're the axle on which rap revolves around
Spit these lyrics like slugs, round after round
We are the kings of rap so we wear a crown
And what this is, is a rise of the underground

[Verse 2 - MP~PHASIZ]
Our obligation is to form a relation with listeners of all variations
With innovations of elevation forced by the willing determination
The mainstream reigning supreme is only an incentive scheme
Lyrics that are agleam will send these soft artists downstream
It's fucking twisted how everyone overlooks the unlisted gifted
The industries tightfisted and insisted to sign us but we resisted
Underground is a blur and not even a connoisseur will demur
That's why when the cheddar's handed out we get no confer
Held by the chains in which retains the thoughts in our brains
Til broken and the reign then is equal to archeological remains
Like a spark in the night it's time to ignite serving as a fright
Success is in sight as I recite the verse that I chose to write
Earth turns cold, people froze in a mold, the onlookers behold
Drama unfolds, listen to what's been told, the game's undersold
Nowhere to go but down, talk of the town, we shall be renowned
Don't look for skill it can't be found, trapped within our voices sound

[Chorus x2]
We're the axle on which rap revolves around
Spit these lyrics like slugs, round after round
We are the kings of rap so we wear a crown
And what this is, is a rise of the underground

that was pimp.

You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback in or this will get deleted...

But yeah this was pretty good....I liked the structure in this it was pretty good....Your flow was alright i thought, stayed on point i thought for the most part...Your vocab was pretty good in this as well...overall this was a pretty good piece...keep at it.

Aight y'all, give us your 2 cents.

my links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96554
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96553
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...2320#post962320

Uppin this...

I Was Feelin This. Flow Was Solid Throughout, You Complimented Each Other Well. Topic Is A Lil Played, But I Dealt With It. Piece Was Ill, Rule, Ya Verse Was Good, Flowed Good. Phasiz, Loved The Multi's, Great Flow. Keep Um Comin.

-Formula.

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Thanks for the reply

Anyone else gon' hit this up?

feelin the flow, was a good peice, i got the impression that it would sound good on audio........Nice peice keep on droppin...............

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Soft focus

Whats the point of living?

The voices in my head Feat. Rule

Unlikely Alias

More Comming soon!

^Thanks

Keep it up Homie,shyt wus good!!...nice work.(wanna heard da audio!!)....holla at me if u do 1!!.....~1~

that wuz tight
word use kicked ass

I do audio but I aint sure about Rule. So I'll have to find out from him first.

This pz was completly on pac. You had the flow the beat the topic everything. I especially enjoyed the vocabulary that's what makes it worth reading. Hell I think I have a large vocab but I do not know what algeam means. listen got to cut this short you do good work tell rule he did a good job as well I gotz to go. pz and luv
hit up hate-hate relationship for me pz

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Let God speak for the underground Psalm 49 16-17
16 Do not be overawed when a man grows rich when the splendor of his house increases
17 For he will take no thing with him when he dies, his splendor will not descend with him
18Though while he lived he counted himself blessed - and men praise you when you prosper-
19 He will join the generation of his fathers, who will never see the light of life

20 A man who has riches without understanding is like the beasts that perish